The Carpet Merchant of Konstantiniyya Volume 1 rerun Book Two Update 8 of ??? (READ the Latest Update, starting from this page)
I am back from the convention rush... with TWO devastating scenes: Zeynel's bargain with God, and his failed attempt to leave Ayse.
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If you can believe it, the very first draft of TCM ended at the point where Zeynel successfully leaves. This was before I committed to expanding Book 1, and then suddenly, his departure no longer made sense. It became obvious that Zeynel would struggle to leave, despite his self-sacrificial nature, because of his overwhelming love to Ayse. That was an interesting psychological conundrum to me to explore. So it was to be, even if it meant a hundred more pages.
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The other outcome of following the "maybe Zeynel doesn't leave successfully the first time" narrative is the opportunity to follow Ayse's reaction to the reality of her husband's murder and his becoming a potentially dangerous revenant.
I really liked the idea of exploring the POV of the loved one who has to comprehend the return/transformation of their beloved in a human-but-inhuman form (The Summer Hikaru Died, which I haven't read but should, comes to mind as an example).
With Zeynel specifically, the entirety of his personhood persists, it's just that he's no longer of human blood or flesh - but a shadow capable of annihilation.
Is your husband of 25 years a shadow....or is that a shadow posing as your husband of 25 years?
Ayse has the same sort of affliction as Zeynel where she'd struggle to leave him behind… the difference is that she's hard-headed, and that will be both Zeynel's saving grace and point of conflict.
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