Oct 24, 2015
Your comic is beautiful, but I have no idea where the story is going and it's hard to engage with the characters. It feels like you have focused too much on atmosphere and world building instead of plot and characters.
Thank you for the feed back! Yeah I have realized this... There is a lot of lore to the world of the comic that I haven’t been able to get to because of how I initially planned the story (it was written in a way to work if it’s all read in one go, haha). I’m doing my best to amend this, please let me know what you think again when there’s more out online! ;w;
