Thank you !! And also !!! THATS RIGHT! I am giving u one of those gold star scratch 'n sniff stickers teachers give out (and also twirling my hair and kicking my feet at the wotw re-read mention ,, omg ,,)
Wait ok here, take her doodle / design page where I'm trying to figure her out as ur reward :
I started off wanting something vastly different than all the other Hatake so far, energy wise— we already got a few cool, quiet ocs, grumpy guys, and plenty of outgoing, cheerful characters. So I decided it's time to add in one of my favorite kinds of ocs: the token pathetic little guy <3
Then I decided to make her related to Yuki, since they both have albanism. And since Yuki + her dead twin brother Maka are pre-existing ocs, her design kinda just fell into place (she actually looks very similar to a specific version of Maka, in au's where he's supposed to be a little less pathetic and a little more lethal) tho I did have the very conscious thought of wanting her to have those classic 'fuck-you' giant anime girl hair vent bangs.
Maka's grandchild,,, oh this girl is about to be SO neurotic.
Thinking she's one of those fun, incredibly hypocritical characters full of contradictions. She loves rules and hierarchy and structure but hates to have it imposed on her; she has her own ideal version of it all, and if you don't abide by HER idea of how things work then clearly you're the problem
She was one of Tsuki's little minions (even more so than Sora, who was more of a genuine friend to him) as kids, helping to bully Tetsuo. When Tetsuo became clan heir, she had a very hard time processing what that actually meant, when he was so well-established in her eyes as being on the bottom of their little social pyramid.
By early day Konoha, she's come to accept it, but still often places a trust/loyalty in Tsuki over her actual clan heir.
-> Putting a little bookmark there actually, that seems like it could develop into an interesting plot. Something involving an outsider POV on that especially could be cool ,, someone struggling to figure out how tf the Hatake chain of command works and why this one inactive shinobi commands so much respect / why Tetsuo allows them to get away with it
In general, the weird dynamic between Tetsuo and Tsuki and how it affects the rest of their age mates when they're supposed to be influential figures among them is so fun ,, So it makes it extra fun when making Chizuki, thinking about exactly how she might fit into / affect that scene
Tsuki has almost definitely had/will have to "put her in her place", as he's one to do— but unlike how it pushed Umi away, I think it would only increase Chizuki's fanaticism. Her conspiracy theorist ass is so ready to join the spiral cult
Her issues with Tetsuo are especially interesting since, as she's training under Keiko to be the clan shepard, this also means she'll one day help be in charge of the smaller, more day to day clan logistics. So she has an actual important job that she needs to work with / for Tetsuo in.
Much like Keiko is a sort of 4th in command (the current hirearchy of the elder Hatake going Haruka, Maru, Daisuke, Keiko) Chizuki might one day fill that 4th role for Tetsuo— if she can keep the disrespectful, under her breath comments to a minimum (for what it's worth, Tsuki usually thinks it's funny. Tetsuo not so much.)
And it's because of this role that, in WOTW chapter 1, she's mentioned as off screen helping to take care of the houses of those who are still sick. It's part of her duties as clan shepherd <3
She's a fucking mess of a woman. If she existed in modern era she'd be that one super quiet, soft spoken, mysterious person— who's actually a fujo furry sending people death threats and dozxing people on Twitter + thirsting on main about hot men. The kind of girl who keeps a full body pillow of Ghost from COD where he's only wearing the mask on her bed.
She's posting a photo of herself in her underwear laying on her bed (covered in empty monster energy, pizza boxes and mini tequila bottles) wearing one of those big fluffy neon red wolf ear headbands, looking on the verge of tears, and posting it with the simple caption of '#girlhood'.
6 minutes later she posts something complaining about how no one likes her posts anymore and maybe she should just kill herself since all her followers hate her now
Just the messiest, most mildly evil, chronically online woman u can imagine. The definition of "girl you're too old for this"
Unfortunately her personality (and social anxiety) also forbids her from saying most of her evil little thoughts— untill she has so many that they just burst out in a terrible explosion that changes everyone's view of her.
So I'm sure that will go great for her
Anyways, rounding back to her being a pathetic little guy type character (and also a little bit evil) ->
She 1000% uses the "I'm just a frail pathetic tearful woman" schtick all the fucking time.
She invokes the spirit of fanon Shang Qinghua to me. But if he were a woman. But still just as sexist about other women btw— like, she's looking around and giving other women names like 'wife material number three' in her head bc she can't be bothered to learn their names
She's on the floor screaming crying throwing up, just throwing a tantrum and making a total scene (she dropped her french fries)
Tetsuo tells her to stop crying and get up, she's making a fool of herself, and she tries to reply but is crying so hard it comes out as an ugly wheeze that sounds like shes on the verge of throwing up instead
Tsuki says the exact same thing but with a pretty smile and she's instantly on her feet, brushing her clothes off and going "sowwy Tsuki 🥺"
Tetsuo is so fucking sick of it here.
Meanwhile Sora is just eating the dropped french fries off the floor. Yummy :D
Opinions on her vary WILDLY in Konoha— but in general seem to be split into camps of, "oh yeah that poor, shy girl" / "she's a worm of a woman" (- Madara, actually) / "horny evil freak with malicious intent." / "Probably harmless ?"
Thank you for ur tags <33 I'm so glad ur interested in the blorbos !! And thank you also for the excuse to think about her more. I think writing all this out helped flesh her out a bit more ✨