Hello! 🎤🏴☠️🔍📋 for OBSERVATION please :)
Hello! Yay, let's talk about my "Observations" fic again :D
🎤 Do you think the story was written in your typical voice? Why or why not?
I think, like all my modern fics and headcanons, this one was written in my typical voice for modern setting works. I don't use overly complicated or overly flowery vocabulary in modern fics. I'm trying to keep them simple and balanced. Also, I added many little details, connected to Fire Nation/Zuko's status/the Jasmine Dragon/the show in general, which is a very me-thing haha :3
🏴☠️ Were there any points in which your characters tried (or succeeded) to commit mutiny against your planned plot? Where did they most want to rebel?
Not so much as mutiny, but I'm sure Zuko would be so pissed with me for making him be attentive to Jin and her flirting, knowing that it partially ruined his prospects with Mai. Also, let's be real, Mai probably wouldn't waste so much time on talking with Ruon-Jian, and she would make a move on Zuko instead lol.
🔍 What detail(s) in the story are you particularly captivated with? Is there any behind the scenes info or backstory?
Honestly, I like all the details about the educational process in the Academy (like Mai writing lesson plans, grading essays, having observation classes, continuing education webinars) because it shows her work-life, I don't see much of it in the fics. Also, I'm glad I came up with authentic, Fire Nation-connected things that she's been teaching her students (discussions about the dragons in literature, poems and metaphors about fire, Fire Nation love ballads etc). I guess you could see that I really loved Literature classes at school haha.
I also like how I made the tables turn in this one with Mai ogling Zuko, for once. In the majority of fics, it's the other way round, and we read beautiful descriptions of Mai. But in my fic, she feels this attraction to Zuko, and we have beautiful (physical) descriptions of a handsome man. I think it shows normal, healthy attraction that women can feel if they're interested in someone. Mai is not robotic, she has her feelings and desires.
📋 What was your main goal for the story and/or writing experience? Do you think that you achieved it?
The main goal was to write Mai as a teacher, who is also a young person and is trying to combine her professional and personal lives. She battles with loneliness that is so common nowadays, chooses her own path (her career choices), opens up and finds people who care about her. I specifically wanted Mai to work with teenagers (they can be difficult to work with) and nail it each time. In the process of reading, my readers could also see that Mai had learned that the first and even the second impression can be misleading, and that people have many layers to them. Also, Zuko seeing Mai's worth as a teacher and telling her that she's really good at her work is a parallel to comics. I'm sure he's amazed by her in every universe and every setting <3
Thank you for the ask <3 I'm so glad and excited that this work gets attention and feedback!! <3













