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Does anyone else have an issue where they have too MANY ideas? Because Iβll try coming up with a plot point, but then be like βooh, what if this happened? Or that? Or maybe this other thing that could be really cool!β And they each send the story in a completely different trajectory than each other and some contradict later points that I need to happen but I still really like all of them and want to do them but I canβt and AUAUUAUAHDGHDHDJJDBSHA
And then itβs been an hour and Iβve spent it all daydreaming about what-ifs that Iβm never gonna make and Iβve written nothing for the actual story Iβm trying to plan. Damn you my overactive imagination
Or Iβll be reading and then go βbut oh what if they said this? Or that? Or did this thing differently? Then what would happenβ AND I CANT. FUCKING. READ THE ACTUAL THING BECAUSE MY BRAINW ONT SHUT UP
Itβs useful sometimes when Iβm trying to come up with ideas for a fic but nOT WHEN IM READING SOMEONE ELSES FIC THEY ALRWADY WROTE!!!! HELP ME
This is the main issue I have with my fic right now.
There's simply too much.
Enough was left untouched in canon that I have a lot that I want to tackle. It takes me a couple months to really hammer down the chapter and that's even if the original 5k draft isn't scrapped and rewritten.
I have a thorough outline I follow which really helps but as you said sometimes better ideas do come up which throw the original plot in a whole different direction.
Then there's also characterization like I will be obsessing over "don't" or "do not." I'm only majorly dealing with a couple character dynamics but I always sit there thinking "Would they act like this?" or "What if I had them do blank instead?" You have the ability to do anything so it naturally leads to endless possibilities for your brain to think of. What works best for me is writing down specific "lines" characters wouldn't cross. Keep in mind events that shaped them in canon and in your fic. As an example, Canon CRK Gingerbrave may not be in a situation where he has to act a certain way but Fic Gingerbrave may be in a situation shaped by your fic's events where he actively has to. And depending on how connected your fic is to canon, canon events and fic events may hold different weights.
(But also, depending on how long you've known the characters and how much you're fixated on them, characterization comes easily. For example, I don't have to do this as much or at all with Strawberry, but Pure Vanilla may be a bit harder.)
Plot points are a whole separate matter when your fic is lore driven or even not at all. It only takes one oversight to contradict canon or even your last chapter. You have to keep all your plot points in line so you don't forget them or accidentally drop them. For this I personally use a solid outline. Maybe a couple bullet points at the end of every chapter noting what changed between character dynamics or in the plot and where that leads to keep it simple (I think I gave you my full one a while back). I'm going to be honest, unless your plot hole is like HUGE people are probably going to overlook it. Usually you can fix it too (again, unless it's really bad), Gingerbrave was lefthanded in Chapter 2 but righthanded in Chapter 6? Congratulations, he's ambidextrous!
(Plus, CRK specifically has lore that's actively being retconned or added to all the time. You don't know what could change so it's better to just keep trudging forward with the information you have.
My central conflict was solved off screen canonically. But that ends up working in my favor and I don't really have to change my fic as I have free will. I said the hut was most likely not near a beach [really obscure gamble] and that was retconned/added as new lore.)
I don't have the issue where people have already written fics with ideas I wanted to use (not because I'm actively plagiarizing left and right but because the characters I write about aren't popular enough for that to be an issue).
But I know that's a bigger issue with more popular characters. Point blank, two writers are never going to tackle a conflict in the exact same way. Everyone has a different writing style and understanding of a character etc etc. Inspiration is a great thing to have as long as it's not copying.
Do not psych yourself out too, I have regrets even about my most recent works but if anything, it's a learning experience and you can always rewrite.
I'm not an expert fanfic writer by any means nor do I know if this is helpful at all but good luck with your writing twin π«‘
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Now try finding a GingerBrave fic that isnβt just shadowvanilla with him in the corner of one scene with the approximate narrative impact of a chair. I donβt even try searching his character tag anymore I just use his angst one π
I usually do that, buts itβs still kind of annoying. And when I DO do that it cuts down the amount of fics by like over half. Which is kinda ridiculous (and in most of them heβs still a minor character, thereβs just different characters as the focus)
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So I, as the Yin to your Yang aka the more insane twin, was rereading your fic for like the millionth time because it is so amaze amaze amaze and I was also reading through the new tags that ao3 added, and noticed one of them was TBI | Traumatic Brain Injury, and I thought "hmm... Strawberry's head wound technically classifies as a brain injury." and then I went down a rabbit hole of what it can cause (especially long term) and heres what I got; headaches, memory loss, seizures, dizziness, visual changes/loss, fatigue, paralysis, weakness, sleep disorders, and way more. So uh, yeah if the dream was actually real, Strawberry would most defo being suffering from at least one of these symptoms (oof)
GingeBrave and Tge Uktimate Cookie shjould kiss. For pride minth
Alright fess up, which one of you gave the Ultimate Cookie Tumblr. At least it wasn't Reddit...
Ulti, if you ask really nicely (and nonviolently) Brave might let you join his polycule. Wizard and Strawberry might conspire to break your knees for a couple weeks but they'll proly adjust.
WHY ARE YOU GOING BACK: A Strawberry Cookie Analysis
SPOILERS FOR TIMELINE OF FATE EPISODE 3:
I'M OUT OF HIBERNATION LET'S DO THIS.
They ALMOST HAD ME. For a second I thought Strawberry wasn't going to come. I thought she got World Exploration Episodes 17 and 18ed and written off.
After all, we ended the last episode with Strawberry being the most hesitant of going to the Witch's Hut because well, that's kinda just how she is. That place traumatized her and mostly likely shaped her into the individual she currently is.
Her fear was kinda shot down.
I get it, it has to be done, we have to go to the hut but DAMN. AGAIN? That is diabolical. Is this going to be the new World Exploration Episode 10, what is it with the game dismissing Strawberry's trauma.
And I've heard that it was frankly kinda out of character on Gingerbrave's part to sort of brush her off which... yeah. He cares about his friends, Strawberry in particular so you would think he would at least talk to her. Especially when you factor in that he already brushed off when she told him cookies being made to be eaten.
But you're starting to see a slight shift in his character where he's starting to care more so about the greater good (a few of my friends compared it to Pure Vanilla's philosophy of the great good above individual good and I thought that was interesting, Pure Vanilla's morals are bleeding into Brave's). Gingerbrave recognizes that the journey to the First Oven, to the hut must be done. Brave has always been good aligned, but now the stakes are higher than ever.
So, by the time we started off with Gingerbrave, Wizard, Pure Vanilla, and then Madeleine with no Strawberry in Episode 3, I was concerned.
Until she spoke up.
-> Side point: These vas had rent due oh my God, Strawberry being sick and scared made ME feel sick and scared.
She was quiet for a hot minute when it started, she didn't even greet Madeleine. Then when she does speak, she's already scared but still wary to speak her mind.
Strawberry's hesitance to go to the hut was talked down this time. She was also actually kinda comforted which was nice to see.
But in the end, it didn't really go anywhere. This isn't the type of conversation that is one and done, one conversation won't be enough to tackle this.
Similarly, I find it odd because Gingerbrave and Wizard seem a bit too eager to return. But to be fair, they were never confirmed to have seen the Witch eat a cookie and they have separate reasons to make the trip. I don't doubt the experience wasn't traumatizing for them as well, especially considering Brave's later hallucination because of the fog but you would think they'd be a little more sympathetic.
I also thought there would be more fanfare about Bravetrio being baked by Witches but there wasn't.
Luckily (for me, not her), Strawberry does end up going but not before earning some really concerning remarks.
For starters, out of everyone currently on this expedition, she's being mentally and physically affected by it the most. She's pale, practically ill, and she talks about her head hurting just yikes all around. And she was already pale before they even reached the sea. Like imagine the trip over here, likely days steadily building up her anxiety and it just kicks in full force.
For a bit, they make it seem in the story that Strawberry is just scared since that's just in her nature but let's be honest...
...She saw the Witch eat a cookie. And unless they retcon that- which I actually wouldn't have any words for- that's obviously awfully traumatizing. We saw a tiny glimpse of her fear during Beast Yeast Episode 15 when she saw Dark Enchantress (because y'know battlefield on fire with cookie bodies and jam and a Witch looking thing calling cookies snacks is gonna bring back memories) but it's here where it REALLY starts to become apparent.
She is also one of three- two. Oh. Two, she's now one of two with the firsthand experience of witnessing a Witch eat a cookie. And as far as she knows, the only one.
Let's tie this back to previous episodes, it's very likely Strawberry thought she was never going to return to the hut. So, imagine how she felt when it was declared her friends were going back to the hut in the previous episode. Immediately. From her point of view, they don't even look scared, in fact they are extremely willing to return.
Which when you're someone like Strawberry who is constantly anxious, it's not a stretch to think "Hey, maybe they didn't believe me when I said the Witch ate a cookie." Especially when you're not holding a conversation about the topic for more than a couple lines with other cookies and they don't seem nearly as concerned as you are.
Overall, I like how they acknowledged that Strawberry was scared, I was praying they were going to carry it over (it would be ooc otherwise in my humble opinion) and thank goodness they did, but this isn't something you tackle so briefly.
Also, no one cared about Witches eating cookies?
I am not going to lie, I was shocked when this was dropped so casually.
Were the beans spilled off screen? Like both cans? Can 1 being cookies being eaten and Can 2 being Bravetrio was baked by a Witch as common knowledge (which from what I remember was in Strawberry's affection chat logs but that's REALLY obscure). I thought we worshipped those Witch guys? At the very least, I thought that cookies being made to be eaten forbidden knowledge? Did that not make Dark Enchantress? That's... I feel like that all deserved to be on screen. Also, Dark Enchantress told Pure Vanilla about cookies being eaten during the Prologue so is he now realizing she was telling the truth?
I guess he owes her a talk now hahaha- oh.
Plus, considering the last cookie who saw a cookie be eaten drove Arc 1 I would be caring. Do they want a White Lily 2 Electric Boogaloo?
They do comfort her though, but they also tell her there's nothing to fear and that they're going to be okay since they're together. And she apologizes for being scared.
Which kinda makes me feel really sad. She's sorry that she was traumatized? She's not being a 'scaredy-cat,' she's having a valid reaction to trauma. She's pale, her head hurts, she feels sick because of that fear, but she doesn't know what to do. She's being rational if anything, there is definitely something to fear and they may not be able to power of friendship their way out of this one.
Thankfully, what is continuation to me is that she doesn't have to go but she still is. She's there for her friends. Wizard wants answers, Brave wants to help the Light, however Strawberry stands to gain nothing but lose everything (her friends).
With Gingerbrave having his whole dynamic with the Light and Wizard's search for answers driving them both to want to go back the hut, it places Strawberry on the opposing side of that goal. Because she's actively TERRIFIED. She doesn't want to go back, she's here for her friends.
Will they do anything with it?
...EH-
Me when I'm in a getting the short end of the stick competition and my opponent is Strawberry.
This is a lose-lose scenario for her if anything. She has the option to stay back but be so real, how would she feel leaving her friends who are going back to the Witch's hut?
...Oh someone's gonna die. Jokes aside, Strawberry's anxious, rightfully so because there is no way this trip is gonna end well. And even if she stayed back, she would have no idea how her friends are faring. Imagine if one of them DIED on that trip, that would destroy her.
Also, this new image they released for the SCOOP website is so funny to me, everyone's looking at the screen and she's just terrified. A true encapsulation of her life right now.
Final things:
Still working on asks.
Still working on The Brave, The Smart, and The Cautious.
-> Which fun fact specifically stated the Witch's Hut was not by a seaside to explain one thing. ...WHAT THE FLIP FLOP DEVSISTERS.
Real fast analysis btw, there's a lot more I can dig into but I'm on a trip tomorrow. Normally, these take a bit longer but I had to rush it ):
And a couple of my friends who asked to be tagged: @strawbrave @c00lgv1
I'm scared Devsisters are aiming for this being the resolution to Strawberry's debacle with the Witch, with seeing her eat a cookie.
Like this is as far as we're going to acknowledge it in canon. She'll be scared sure but it's not going to change anything, no one will be at fault for brushing her off, and her trauma will be quietly shuffled away.
Because if they resolved everything else related to the Witches and Bravetrio so casually who's to say they won't do that here.
It's really unfortunate but it's definitely a possibility.
Or if we wanna be optimistic maybe this is the beginning to something bigger, if Gingerbrave and Wizard are getting their own respective motives and goals regarding the Witches, maybe this is her path? But I seriously doubt they're going to let her do anything.
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