Okay fellow whumplings. I'm writing an original story and need to crowdsource some ideas. The main gist of the story is that a character has been bitten by a zombie. There's an antidote to the zombification, but it doesn't always work, it's incredibly painful, and takes a full 48 hours to administer. I need things to do with the character during that 48 hours.
I already have his best friend (not a medical professional) trying to talk him through it, keep his spirits up, give him sips of water, and help him to the bathroom. I have another character (a doctor) administer treatments and painful wound care. The whole thing takes place in a low-resource 35-year-post-apocalypse setting in the summer in Ohio (hot, buggy, and humid).
I am happy to entertain the possibility other characters, but generally I want the friend character to be worried and feeling out of her depth, and the doctor character to be kind of jaded, grizzled, and sad because he thinks there's a good chance the main will die.
Thank you in advance!
Thank you for all your wonderful ideas!
I'm using some of them but could use more ideas for scenes during the 48 hours. What would you, as a whumpling, like to see out of a low-resource medical setting? What about scenes between good friends during a difficult time? I just need like 1-2 good ones and the rest I've pretty much got planned.
A few things have changed since I originally asked for ideas- the doctor is a little more caring and there is about a 75% chance that the main will live. Still enough to worry him, but I didn't want this to be particularly miraculous since within the culture of the story there are a lot of people who have survived the treatment before him.
The focus really is on him suffering the effects. Currently he is experiencing severe cramping set off by movement, tearing and sweating, severe shivering, nausea, and fasciculations so bad his skin hurts. I will add severe dehydration to the mix, slight delirium that makes him think he's losing his mind, and maybe a seizure as a culminating event.














