It's incredible how many read-throughs of the series it took me to get that, in this part, Lymond is trying to find a man named Jonathan Crouch...
Chapter 1: Taking En Passant
The epigraph? Honestly, I never bother. I think a lot of new readers get hung up on the idea that, because this is such a complicated book, it's important to be able to read/translate/understand every single part of it, lest you miss some key clue that will make the whole thing easier to follow. But if you try to follow everything, you will be overwhelmed, and this is even more true for everything in another language! (Unless, obviously, it's one that you already speak).
Yes, there's obviously meaning in all the things Lymond says in another language, or in the epigraphs like the one at the beginning of this chapter. There are even books dedicated to giving the full context and translation for each of them. But to me, they're more like easter eggs for the dedicated fan. Nothing that appears in the books untranslated is necessary to understanding the plot of the books. Do not bother! Skim! Keep going!
In the case of Lymond reeling off quotations in other languages, it's more important as a character than a plot note. How do other people react when he does this? Is it as annoying for them as it is for you, the reader? One of my overarching theories about The Lymond Chronicles is that the reader's experience of reading the books maps pretty well onto the characters' experience of Lymond himself: ie, if it's annoying and obtuse to read about him, that's probably how characters are experiencing Lymond in the text. He's being annoying and pretentious when he speaks in another language. He's putting up an elaborate screen between himself and other people: making himself purposefully unknowable.
1. The English Opening
Ok, speech over! What happens in this chapter? Well, first, war: as usual, I barely pay attention to the details here. The English defeated the Scots badly at Pinkie, and there's one army outside Edinburgh and another one at the border town of Annan.
Also near Annan (easily confused, as I just did in typing this, with Arran) is Lymond's band of outlaws! Two of them, Turkey Mat and Johnnie Bullo, catch up on the latest gossip.
Important to take from this is that Lymond's men came across an English messenger recently, heading for the English forces at Annan with a message, but Lymond wouldn't let them capture or attack the messenger -- he even made sure he got through safely with his message. This makes his men think that maybe he's supporting the English in this war, or at least placing his bets on them to win.
Then Lymond shows up! He's in full Lymond form: dressed beautifully, "as in the sack of his mother's home," and reeling off pretentious and annoying quotations like we just talked about:
âJohnnie, my night-black familiar. Civilityâs nearly as dull as sobriety and I cannotâwill notâbe labelled dull. I have peper and piones, and a pound of garlik; a ferthing-worth of fenel-seed for fasting dayes, but dullness have I none: nor am I overfond of being discussed, my Johnnie.â
The content here barely matters. He's speaking floridly to his ragtag band of outlaws, dressed to the nines--putting on a show. The words are a kind of extra layer of show that he wraps around himself. He's also separating himself from his men by talking this way: it's totally unapproachable, even if it's funny or impressive. But it's not exactly companionable.
Lymond also has a stranger with him, a "new recruit," who turns out to be... Will Scott! The son of Wat Scott of Buccleuch, the one who's been fighting with his father about morality ever since he came back from university with big ideals. And somehow they've led him to... try to join up with Lymond and his outlaws.
Lymond, like his men, is skeptical about this and thinks it might be a trap: if Will Scott becomes one of them, it would be easy for him to betray them at any point to Wat and the rest of the Scots. But, after initially telling Will he's going to send him home--and after a series of tests* and a discussion about morality vs. hypocrisy, where Will argues that he respects Lymond for being consistent in his immorality and vice more that he respects hypocritical morality--he changes his mind and lets Will stay on: âHeâs going to be a naughty, naughty rogue like you and me.â
Then Lymond and Will leave for Annan, but not before Lymond reminds his men to do whatever it takes to make sure the English messenger they found gets through to the English forces--at Annan, where Lymond is also going--with his message.
*The final test is to order Will to "kill the man by the cooking pot." This is a stunningly cruel thing for Lymond to order, made worse by the fact that Will obeys without the slightest hesitation, loosing an arrow directly at the man. However -- the man moves just in time, because, as Lymond reveals, he has exceptional hearing. This was the man's punishment for an unspecified transgression: Lymond knew that Will Scott wouldn't be able to actually kill him, but the order to do so served as a lesson of some kind to each of them.
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LYMOND SPARK NOTES: a low-effort project by @yekoc
There is a lot going on in Dorothy Dunnettâs series the Lymond Chronicles, including literary references, un-translated quotations in multiple languages, and real-life historical personages. This project is not intended to delve into, really, any of that. Instead my hope is to map out the basic emotional and narrative core of Lymond, the stuff thatâs underneath all the rest of Dorothyâs (and Lymondâs) trimmings. Imo the point of the books is that Lymond is traumatized, bisexual, and he REALLY wants to kill himself. So letâs talk about all of that.Â
Book 1: The Game of Kings
A useful way to think of The Game of Kings is as a mystery novel. The central mystery here (which continues in various forms throughout the series), is who is Lymond? This is a mystery to the reader, but itâs also a mystery to all of the other characters in the book. Each character has their own view of Lymond, and often these views donât line up at all. This makes the book confusing: sometimes itâs even hard to keep track of whether the person being discussed is Lymond, especially when heâs in disguise or being referred to by one of his many different names or titles. And this isnât just a literary device â the question of who Lymond actually is, and where his loyalties really lie, is the question that frames the bookâs plot and that is finally answered (in part) at the end of the novel.Â
Opening Gambit: Threat to a Castle
Lymond -- our hero! -- secretly returns to Scotland from forced exile, gets a pig drunk, flirts with and threatens his sister-in-law, sets fire to his mother's castle, stabs a pregnant woman, and infuriates his brother. War with England begins.
From the book's first lines we get different takes on Lymond, all from outside points of view. âBusy men preparing for war against Englandâ say his name âwith contempt, with disgust,â and â interestingly â âwith a side-slipping look at one of their number.â In contrast, âa womanâs voiceâ says his name âwith a different noteâ and a laugh. Finally, Lymondâs own men wait for him with âconcernâ â they care about him. This pattern of different people seeing and describing Lymond radically, and confusingly, differently, will continue throughout the series. Yay!
Okay, but what actually happens in this chapter?
A lot. Lymond gets a smugglerâs pig drunk, for example. But here are some key things we learn:
Mungo Tennantâs house (Edinburgh):
Lymond is an outlaw (why?), is not supposed to be in Scotland, and will be killed if heâs caught.Â
Sir Wat Scott of Buccleuch and Tom Erskine, two important landowning Scots who are loyal to the baby Queen Mary, discuss who else can be trusted to protect the country against a potential English invasion. Two options are:
Sir Andrew (Dandy) Hunter. They reject him as too poor (âhis estateâs been bled dryâ) and with an ill-equipped army.Â
The third Baron Cutler. This is Lymondâs older brother, Richard. The conversation about Richard is critical to the plot of this book: Buccleuch says some people think Richard Cutler cannot be trusted because Lymond himself has committed treason, and that if he doesnât hunt down his own brother then heâll be as good as a traitor too. Buccleuch disagrees with this and trusts Culter, but he and Erskine both acknowledge that if Richard Cutler doesnât eventually bring Lymond to justice, the Scottish court wonât trust him to help against the English.Â
Lymond, listening outside the door, overhears this conversation about his brother the Baron Culter.Â
Lymond then sneezes and is caught listening. He insults Richardâs new wife and departs. We discover, as the scene draws to a close, that he has stolen all of Mungoâs smuggled French wine â and then dumped it into Edinburghâs gutters.Â
Sybillaâs house (Midculter):
Sybilla, Lymondâs mother, had three children: Richard (now the Third Baron Culter), Lymond (titled the Master of Culter, because heâs the younger son), and Eloise, who died at school in her teens.Â
Wat Scottâs wife Janet complains to Sybilla that Watâs son and heir, Will Scott, has come back from university with high-minded moral ideals and is fighting with Wat as a result.
Janet attempts to talk to Sybilla about Lymond and the rumors that heâs come back to Scotland. Sybilla wonât focus on the conversation and keeps trying to change the subject. Earlier, we learned that âwhat she thought of Lymondâs activities she did not say.â This is interesting, since sheâs not reluctant to give her opinion about anything else.
Janet does manage to mention that if the English took over Scotland, Lymond might be restored to the line of succession for Midculter (he was removed from it when he was outlawed) and become his brotherâs heir again â if his brotherâs new wife doesnât have a son first.Â
 Lymond sneaks into the castle during this conversation and takes Mariotta, Richardâs wife, briefly hostage. He also flirts shamelessly with her.Â
Mariotta is confused by Lymond: she is expecting something terrifying, not an âinsolent, self-indulgent,â slightly drunk rich boy. Lymond teases her again, saying that didnât she know he looks different than Richard? He has the âfamily coloring,â whereas Richard, who has brown hair, does not.Â
Lymond says that he and his men have forced their way into the castle because he needs money to support his vice, and to amuse himself. When Mariotta reminds him that his own mother is in the group of women heâs proposing to terrorize, Lymond receives the news âwith tranquil pleasure.â
Boghall:
Wat Scott muses on the confusing politics of the English and Scottish border wars. Here I, your note-taker, skim and skim and conclude that some Scots support the English and some would rather turn to the French for protection, and it all has a lot to do with Protestantism vs. Catholicism, but in the end Wat Scott dislikes the English far more.Â
We meet Richard Culter for the first time: âA sober, thickset figure with brown hair and reliable grey eyes.â
Wat Scott tells Richard that Lymond is back in Scotland and says that Richard might as well be in league with Lymond if heâs not going to actively oppose him.Â
Wat Scott also tells us why Lymond is an outlaw: âFive years ago your brother Lymond was found to have been selling his own country for years: heâs been kicked from land to land committing every crime on the calendar and now heâs back here, God forgive him, with filthier habits and a nastier mind than he set out with.â
Wat concludes his argument: the Scots think the English are going to invade and they need to field an army. If they canât trust Richard and his men to be part of that army against the English â and they canât, if thereâs any belief that heâs sympathetic to Lymond, who is a traitor to Scotland and sold the country out â then the Scots army will lose.Â
As they have this conversation, smoke rises in the distance. Lymond has set fire to the castle at Midculter, which contains Richardâs mother and Richardâs wife.
Midculter:
Sybilla sees her son Lymond for the first time since he was outlawed and exiled. He is armed and holding her daughter-in-law hostage. âAfter the first moment, every trace of expression left the Dowagerâs face; her white hair shone like salt.â
As Lymondâs men rob all the women, Mariotta notices that Lymond will not look at his mother at first. Finally, he does, and Sybilla accuses him of âplay-acting.â Lymond says the robbery is real, and that he has changed from the son she used to know.Â
âFrom the stews and alleyways of Europe with a taste for play actingâyesâand killing and treason and crimes, they say, nameless and enticingly erotic. Havenât I been worth five yearsâ excellent gossip to you?â
Lymond then throws his knife and hits Janet of Buccleuchâproving his point that this is not play-acting, despite his flowery and dramatic speeches throughoutâand exits, setting fire to the castle on his way out.Â
Richard reaches Midculter and finds out what happened. He swears that he wonât be âmade a foolâ of by Lymond again, implying that he trusted him before but now sees him as the outlaw and criminal he really is and will help hunt him down.Â
He canât go after Lymond, though, until after he fights the war with England thatâs just begun.
Europe
King Henry of France watches as the English go to war to try to take control of Scotland by forcibly marrying Queen Mary to the young King Edward.
Henry would like to âserve and protectâ Scotland, but has to make sure he doesnât threaten the English so much that they ally with the Holy Roman Empire against him. So⌠he watches and waits.Â
Reading Questions:
Of all the views of Lymond we are given in this chapter, whose do you trust most and why?
Why did Lymond pour out all of Mungo Tennant's wine? (I genuinely don't know but it's Dorothy so there must be a reason...)