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For the last Exponential Decay update, I wrote a little more of the conversation between Tor, Cora, and Tai. I'll upload it today or this weekend.

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my art style is changing again and i am struggling

#i need to learn french

WHiO chapters 6-8 have been posted!

Moderate plot changes, but I'm really happy with it.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/42478995/chapters/106711638

#as always the original will be on literotica

i am using SO many semicolons in these next few chapters. i'm sorry. they're kind of, uh, sultry. Do we say this? can punctuation be sultry?

#i read war and peace then more panics from molinard and there are so many semicolons and they're used so well!#augh!#me to me: get your literacy up big dawg

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Cora and Tai, 8hrs

timelapse below the cut, flash warning throughout

Brushes and textures from @thedawner (this one if anyone is wondering)

#though the really dark version has great vibes #i do want my art to be visible

Chapter 5 rewrite is up!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/42478995/chapters/106711500

I said that my updates were shorter than the first draft, but that was the page count. The word count is higher, so there's actually more!

#dude that link did not want to format at all.#working on 6 today too. we'll see how long it takes now with my New Process (tm)

edit notes for the next four chapter rewrites are done. I feel like they should go up wayyyyy faster now. And the sex scenes should be a little better in terms of characterization. Little plot inconsistencies with the introduction of Mar's team will also get fixed, as well as Tor and Mar's relationship

Jesus. Am I doing patch notes for a story?

#reading war and peace and trying not to let it get to me

It's embarrassing having my awful first drafts posted on ao3 for anyone to read, particularly endless draw, but it did just occur to me that even that will be scraped by AI

#hehe im poisoning the data

#the coras #i was a bit lazy w this my arms are still hurting

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apologies in advance for the rewrite. the plot takes precedence over descriptive porn

the first draft with all the good shit will always be up on literotica

Chapter 4 final draft is up!

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

I'm not sure if it's because of fewer line breaks, reducing Cora's monologues, or being less specific with certain details, but somehow, Ch. 4 is 4 pages shorter. I can't even find what's missing!

It's the inner monologue. Jesus. It was one of the things I didn't like about my first draft, because I think I can make Cora pretty clear without exposing her every thought and reaction to the reader. And in case anyone likes the way it was, I'm leaving the original version up on Literotica.

#some things will change in length #I think parts of the events on Takka are gonna go longer now that I have a better understanding of everyone's character and motivations #including Mar and Koramin

fear of humans

#i s2g if i have a post surgical infection #jail for surgeon #jail for thousand years #i feel like garbage

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Typing is hard but drawing is easy?

dragged myself out of bed to get this on here. the day I can lock in and animate....

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