Characters can talk a lot (weâre looking at you, Aizen) and posting a huge wall of text can, at times, be daunting for both writer and reader. Hereâs some tips on how to better incorporate description and dialogue into your roleplays to give those monologues a little more flow and realness, so weâre not as reluctant to write/read it when it comes along.
Establish their speech pattern:
     Do they talk fast?
If so, try to avoid anything that would indicate pauses, like periods, and replace them maybe with a dash or comma (this isnât saying âget rid of all periods!â ... please donât do that) as that can add urgency and make readers who, if they read aloud, get slightly breathless while reading that section out--which is the point. (Look, that last sentence is an example!) Moral of the story is; eliciting a certain reaction from your reader is more important than making sure your dialogue has âproper grammarâ.
     Do they pause a lot?
If so, making the dialogue peek in and out from description is your best bet besides using the obvious â...â addition to the ending or beginning (or middle) of your dialogue sections. This also gives you a great chance to bring in details about your character without dedicating an entire separated and frankly oddly placed paragraph someplace else in your reply. Sometimes less is more, anyways. An example would be: âItâs been a while--since you anâ me fought like this,â Gin said, unaffected by the battle brewing behind him. âDo ya remember? Yâcame at me so angrily when all I did was cut off that Gatekeeperâs arm...â yada yada, etc., etc.
     Do they stutter/stumble on words?
Try to avoid the classic âY-y-y-y-you h-h-h-h-hungry?â because not only is that a immensely offensive way to depict stuttering, itâs also mostly inaccurate via bad media representation; try explaining instead that they struggle on a word, like âSorry for the in--the incon--inco--â they struggled, sighed, breathed in through their nose, and tried an alternative of just â--sorry.â This gives your character more of a chance to show that the issue isnât just dialogue-shallow, and is frustrating without being blatantly angsty. No need to show how many times it took for them, either. One or two slip-ups in the dialogue and an added âthey struggledâ description following can do the trick.
     Do they repeat themselves?
Everybody repeats themselves, fictional characters shouldnât be exempt from this just because they want to look/sound cool. Characters can be moved to repeat themselves if they; find a better way to word something, find out someone wasnât listening, lost their train of thought and needed to backtrack, are realizing what theyâre saying means a lot to the listener, and many more reasons. This is something that is ESPECIALLY true during confession scenes! Your character is expressing thoughts they probably have never spoken about before--so of course theyâll backtrack or do any or all of the above.Â
These are just a few examples and speech patterns. At the end of the day something as small as starting a new paragraph to continue your dialogue can change the pace of your writing, your characterâs voice, and all-together help your reply look much nicer.