Alright, for the most part, this isn't actual questions- I hope you don't mind that the majority of it is going to be commentary~ :3
I'm not usually a fan of IFs that start the main character off as a little kid, since most authors either make the kid seem like a midget adult, or completely powerless/pointless. However, you did a great job at making the early childhood section enjoyable: most toddlers - young children are really obnoxious, hyper, weird, idiotic trash goblins and you nailed that extremely well! Yes, that is intended as a compliment.
At the very beginning, I wasn't sure about the almost absurdist writing style (the metaphors and similes are definitely on the absurdist side) and for a while, I ended up not liking it at all; however, it was surprising to learn that the more I read, the more I decided it actually fit the story and decided that a more grounded style would not have worked quite as well, especially not for a very strange young goblin MC with synesthesia.
I think you also did a very good job with both David and Coleman; they definitely fit the bill of tired and frustrated, yet proud and indulgent dads.
I do not like Cecilia, Rosalee, or Ren at all - and it's not because they are poorly-written characters! The three of them are perfect examples of "the friend that no one likes," for different reasons~ You did phenomenally well with writing the three and my only real gripe is that the main character doesn't have the option to be sarcastic, bitchy, or even that irritated with the in the first part of the prologue. Which I do understand is because it's the first part of the prologue and I won't ask if you'll include options like that in it- I'll just quietly hope that there will be options to not always be friendly when (and in Ren's case, if) they make an appearance and do something dumb to the MC again.
The childhood shenanigans were actually pretty well-done!
E is a decent character and I get that the whining, clinginess and weird jealousy is because, like everyone else, E is still just a kid. However, I am hoping that Jett ends up being one of the ROs and not just a supporting character, since so far, he's the one I would have had my MC hook up with.
I know it's kind of nitpicky/weird, but with the character customization in the beginning, would it be possible to request that at some point, it gets expanded to include a few more options; such as being able to create an albino MC, (pinkish or reddish eyes, white hair, extremely pale skin) or MC that has vitiligo? It would make no sense to request things like piercings, tattoos, or dyed hair for child MC, but it would be great to be able to decide if MC has anything of the sort, when they get older.
That's really all I can think of right now~! I'm definitely looking forward to the next update and to see where everything ends up going!
Yes, with regards to the customisation that’s pretty much a placeholder because at the time I was too lazy to do it in detail as it was low priority in comparison to the actual scenes. It’ll be overhauled completely in the future and more detailed, particularly making you pick an ethnicity, as in the later episodes MC will unavoidably be treated differently by certain characters depending on ethnicity and gender. Adult features like tattoos are already options in episode 1.
On a side note, I find it funny how many people disdain Cece currently because I’m about 99% sure she’ll be the fan favourite by episode 1. And yes, narratively, MC couldn’t fight back much in part 1 because we needed to establish them as a victim as it’ll make part 2 and especially 3 make a lot more sense that way.