Excerpt: Yosalyn visits the Hypnos Den
Ok I was tagged by @fayeisnowwriting @fayethesuccubus but I have no idea how this works so I used the same words. But then I found this whole thing that works well as another excerpt so the whole thing is under the cut. Anyway the words are forever and disappear. This is the one for disappear. Here is the other post for forever.
and I tag @focsle @rinnannon and @platinuumpussycat and I know more of my followers are writers so I tag you all too
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After the Great Storm: Gangs of Olympia - disappear
Yosalyn entered the third floor hallway, the door slamming shut behind her as soon as she crossed the threshold.
It wasn't a long walk to the end of the hallway, but Yosalyn couldn't help but feel as though she had been transferred to some world between worlds. Her footsteps echoed over the muffled bass, and no other sounds could be heard, though Yosalyn knew that behind each door she passed were small rooms crowded with mostly teenagers deep asleep under the influence of Hypnos. The deep stage was what they called it, when they fell into an unbreakable trance that could last for hours to days. The deep stage was preceded and followed by a shallow stage, in which users could live out their dreams in the real world.
Was it dangerous? Of course it was. She'd heard of so and so who had a violent dream and went on a killing spree or someone else who stabbed themselves to death thinking they could flush the monsters out of their body. But Wheeze had always assured her that it was extremely rare, and she believed him. Those disappearances—just people who couldn't handle themselves. First-timers, lightweights. Nothing she had to worry about. So far, the halls stayed silent, no screams of terror sounding out from behind a closed door, no crazed druggies running from room to room covered in blood. So yeah, nothing to worry about.










