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Congrats on finishing GSBID. How r u feeling now that it's done?

I've had another question that's been bothering me since the fic ended and if this goes against ur rules, obvi don't answer

There weren't anymore smut scenes in GSBID after the whole fight between Law and Reader. It made me wonder if their dynamic in bed or the sex changed after Reader's assault since that's when they started having less animosity towards each other at work/hating each other less or if they were still that freaky for each other. I was hoping for another smut scene in the story (yes, a little cause I'm a freak but mostly) to see how they interacted once they were starting to finally figure things out between them. I was a little too scared to ask since I didn't want to make you uncomfortable and fill ur inbox with horny asks 🫣 but I haven't been able to let the thought go

Thanks for writing such an amazing story! I'm excited for part two of ur other Law story

Hey! It doesn’t feel real. But considering my ambitions for it, I still don’t feel like it’s actually done. Still a lot of work to do

Thank you for such a great question. I wish i had a better answer for it

I had intended for them to have sex again where it started off more gentle—maybe MC starts out on top—then they kinda look at each other and go nah too soft and go back to something much more freaky. But that scene didn’t have a natural place in the story, especially with them being so candid for each other toward the end.

I thought about adding it in the second to last chapter after their fry excursion but then i felt like it would make the twist in the last chapter feel like a more sinister betrayal. Same for the epilogue, it just didn’t seem natural to put there.

I’m already planning on doing some heavy editing because I want to release GSBID as a standalone book. Since MC is a reader insert, I didn’t delve too deeply into her, so I didn’t have much room to explore deeper themes—especially since the fic was already so long. I think they’ll get a moment when MC is actually a fully formed character in the finalized version.

All in all, I thought it was far more important to highlight their emotional proximity.

In my writing style, I have a rough outline in my head, and I write until it feels just right and then I stop. I’m sure with this as a fully formed draft, I can better move things around to check off all the boxes I wanted to cover.

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