Man I can’t stop replaying The Exile (The twine and the original lol). Your writing is so good and I love how you write all your characters! Sorry if this has been asked before or this comes across as pushy or impatient, but is there any updates to chapter 2? The last I heard was a possible release for November or something along those lines. I totally understand if you’ve been busy with other things though!
Ah thank you!
Yes, there were some delays. Mainly health stuff and then holiday stuff. As of now, Chapter 2 is being wrapped up but I'm currently away from the computer that has the files to actually do that. So I'm currently working on Chapter 6 in the meantime!
Here's a Vethna romance snippet from it :P
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"I was worried you wouldn't come," you confess. Your voice is hoarse and weak, your eyes heavy. But you refuse to fall asleep with them here, even if their very presence alone has you feeling more relaxed by the second. Safe.
Vethna's brows furrow as they lean over you. You can smell the scent of lavender perfume clinging to their hair as it falls from their shoulders, tickling your face.
"Why wouldn't I have?" they ask softly. Their thumb strokes your cheek. You swallow thick, unsure of what to say.
You're used to being left behind. Used to being forgotten. Used to being unwanted.
"Look at me, Veth," you mutter. Covered in bandages head-to-toe, reeking of gauze and blood.
They do. Their eyes rake over your face, flittering over your features. You can see the concern in their gaze, the way their lips press softly together in empathy. And then they're leaning in closer, pressing a soft kiss to both of your temples. They let out a soft sigh then, breath warm on your skin before they tuck their face into the top of your head.
"You call and I'll come," Vethna reassures, mumbling against you. "Always."
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kinda curious to see whether the ros would choose loved and lost OR to never have loved at all. if u can maybe u can add in esme, emeline and marcelle? (also sorry if this had already been asked b4!)
oooh... fun 👀
Love and lost: Vethna, Sabir, Amilia, Freedom, Emeline, Esmerelda
Never loved at all: Nikke, Jost, Syfyn, Marcelle
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Not a question I just need to say I love the wip and I love Sabir and Vethna! Romancing them both is like introducing the outdoor cat(Vethna) you've been feeding for weeks to your indoor cat(Sabir) and they immediately start fighting. Like yeah I totally predicted this but did I try anyway? Yes I did.
why is this literally the most accurate way to describe the two of them my god
mx pheo 🧍♂️ I have, a question 🙏 in chapter 3, when mc can ask vethna "what are we?" and vethna says "what do you want us to be?" how come they look saddened if choosing the option "something, I think"? if it's not spoilers ofc! I was just so fascinated by the reaction, it made me curious
B/c they also want to be something with MC and now that MC’s confirmed it, it just further pushes into Vethna’s face what they can’t have 🤭
It's sort of an “it would’ve been better if you didn’t like me because then I wouldn’t have to mourn what we could be, if not for (insert x, y, z)" situation.
What's the go-to topic for the RO's if you want to get them talking for the next 4 hours straight? In other words, what kind of things are they most interested in/passionate about?
Hmm...
Vethna: Politics in Vygrand, the ethics of blood magic, the history of magic in general... they are very much an academic at heart and like trying to find the balance between a "perfect world" and reality. Plus they've never spoken about these things to someone who takes them seriously, so having a place to do just that would have Vethna blabbering for hours.
Nikke: Weapons, daggers, specifically. He collects them as he finds them which may be grim to other people (considering he usually takes them from the bodies of the people he kills), but hey... it's still a cool collection, okay? He also loves talking about all his adventures and sharing stupid stories about cool places he's visited. Also fighting techniques. He's genuinely super into that. Goes for Jost + Nikke that they both have A LOT to say about the Taipan gang in Vrithka as well. Like a lot a lot. (None of them are good things)
Jost: Jost is a listener, not a talker. But in the rare, rare occasion you have her going on about something, it's usually because she's upset and somehow, you became the one person she trusts enough to vent things to. It's not necessarily upset as in sad, per se, but she's in a place emotionally where needs someone to bounce ideas and thoughts off of. (However, passion-wise, she's super into the arts, so you could probably pull some words out from her re. arts from the Old Worlds, museums, that sort of thing).
Amilia: Amilia does not stop talking. Amilia will go for hours talking about a cute mushroom on the side of the road, no not underestimate her. And you know what? Yes, she's doing it to annoy who she's with, but part of her really is interested in that mushroom you know. On a more serious note, she's really into music and getting to know people. Amilia's one of those people that makes others open up pretty easily, and it's something she genuinely enjoys since she likes learning the "lore" of individuals. (... is that just gossip?)
Sabir: Astrology, the gods of the Old World, the Old World in general, really. Interestingly enough, Sabir does not enjoy talking about politics. Like you can rile him up if you try hard and enough, but he sincerely tries to avoid getting too far into it because it's such a glib subject. That, and he's already talking about politics all day given his position. Sabir isn't a ramble talker though-- he won't just chatter for hours on end about something. He's into the art of conversation, you see. The back-and-forth is what's fun for him, so he'd rather talk about nothing at all and fill the conversation with shallow banter than passionately talk about his map collection.
Syfyn: Just remind her of the time someone vaguely pissed her off one time and you got about an hour of entertainment off that incident alone. (One time a person cut her in line at the mess hall, one time she stubbed her toe because someone moved a box, one time--) Syfyn also likes talking about combat and training, but Nikke's more like "genuine excitement and tips and tricks" and Syfyn's more like "lmfao I kicked your ASS you're a loser" or "did you see how hard I punched that thing lemme remind you"
Freedom: Hmm... this only works if one is super-super close with Freedom, but they'll be very genuine and skip the word-games when it comes to talking about the Old World, the time when the other gods were alive, their past and people they've met/known. That's the one thing Freedom could speak about for hours and be upfront about AND be genuinely invested in the conversation. They enjoy sharing relics of history with people who are actually willing to listen, and the fact anyone might want to really know about them on an individual level would be very flattering.