This is a small sneak peek at the start of day 1 for my game. I wanted to post it so I could get feedback about what to improve and allat since I know I'm not that good of a writer and i need outside opinion. I hope you like it!
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The world is…Destroyed. Everything is gone. And the people are…different.
We were normal people, living normal lives until that explosion.
March 16th, 2041, 10 months since the outbreak
I look around the room. The first level of this townhouse I’ve made into my own base, which is closer to the city.
Without the boarded windows and waves of dust and debris washed across every surface, mostly undisturbed, this must’ve been a nice home.
I mean- sure, it's risky; a big city equals more people and more people equals more of those…things, but hey, high risk high reward, right?
“I think I have everything, don't I?"
I check my pack one more time, same items I’ll need in each of their respective spots; first aid kit, extra food, a weapon, etc.
I pull up my hood and mask and set off into our new world, hopefully prepared for what it throws my way.
Sunlight beams through the clouded sky, illuminating the wasteland that was once a bustling city. Old buildings and skyscrapers that were once booming with people and life, now empty and ransacked by passing raiders for supplies and the devastating shockwave from the blast.
Hordes of zombies stagger throughout the streets absently, dragging themselves painfully with each step as I cautiously watch from behind a heap of abandoned cars.
I can understand why they are fascinating to some because this is the first time in human history that something like this has happened.
Zombification had been seen in bugs before, but never like this, and not with us. These ‘things’ are disgusting. grotesque and deformed extremities; unnatural to be seen on once human bodies, and an unquenchable thirst for flesh, any flesh they can get their hands on.
“This is just my luck today, huh?”
The horde shuffled their way in front of this old convenience store that surprisingly came out practically unscathed after everything. It’s a place I hit up either for extra things I need for the base, or where I hide before making my journey to better stores.
It was conveniently where I was planning to go today, but I guess that's not happening any time soon. I peer over from my hiding place to gauge whether or not it's worth waiting for them to leave.
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Two survivors appear to be having a worse day than me. Panicking as the zombies close in on them. I’d feel worse for them if they weren’t incredibly unprepared for their scavenging. I mean, come on, nearly a year of this, and you didn’t think to bring more than just a flare?
A flare? Oh no, who brings a flare to a scavenge? The scared survivor points the flare up and fires it, creating this alluring bright flash in the air that you could see from miles away. The perfect thing to attract more zombies.
“People just don’t think. Welp, time to go.”
I look back at the survivors, arguing in their final moments. I’d feel worse if they didn’t just do the dumbest thing you could do in a zombie apocalypse. Like, whose first thought is to fire a flare? Something that is used to alert people to help from long distances.
“I should probably get moving.”
I readjust my gear and start on my way back before having to see those monsters get their fill. I see one lone zombie just standing. It just sat there blankly, not following its horde to ravage those poor but dumb humans.
“Whatever. It’s too far to catch up with me now. I’ll just try again tomorrow.”
The same old disheveled boards greet me as I return home. The base wasn’t hit as badly so it was the best option for when I moved bases to be closer to more stores. I do the normal rounds around the house to check every exit if they’re boarded correctly, locking the rest of the world out, leaving me to my lonesome.
Newspapers litter the floor, crinkling at each of my steps, echoing throughout the house. I wonder how many people have walked through these halls as I am right now. I wonder if they expected the world to turn out like this. I don’t think anyone did.
Crackling noises echo from the front room of the house. It’s the dingy radio I’ve had since I was young. It’s very tiny and adorned with stickers given to me. I still don’t know how it still works.
I tried to adjust the dials to make the message clear. It sounds like another one from the Government. I don’t get my hopes up for any message on the radio anymore. The same old “we’re working on it” and “we are here for you,” but haven’t updated us at all about what’s happening or how the rest of the world is.
A feminine voice peaks through the static.
"*kzzt* We have established a *kzzt* haven for all survivors. In *kzzt* five days, please gather all *kzzt* essential belongings and make your *kzzt* to your state’s capital. From there, you will be picked *kzzt* and taken to the designated location in DC. *kzzt* are actively working on a vaccine for you all. Please ensure *kzzt* all survivors are informed. *kzzt*"
“Are they being serious? There's no way to estimate how many survivors there are. How could they know how many supplies we would need-”
Something massive hit the door full force. The force alone shook the house, silencing everything except for the repeating message on the radio.
Too scared to speak, I grabbed the closest thing near me, that being a wooden bat, and waited.