I'm excited to introduce myself! I'm a writer, beta reader, translator and editor with a passion for helping writers bring their stories to life.

Every story deserves thoughtful feedback, and that's where I come in. I provide detailed, constructive, and honest reviews that help authors strengthen their plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, and overall reader experience—while preserving their unique voice.

My services include: Beta Reading Editing & Proofreading Translation Manuscript Feedback Story Development Support

Whether you're working on your first chapter, a completed novel, fanfiction, or another creative project, I'd love to help you refine your work and bring out its full potential.

I'm looking forward to connecting with fellow writers, readers, and creators. If you're interested in working together or have any questions, feel free to send me a message.

I do intend to get an update for A Tale Older Than Time (on WEBTOON) done before its second anniversary on the 11th of august. As such, I will likely continue being quiet on this blog until that is finished.

In the mean time, here is a small teaser for a potential new story idea that has come to form, featuring 5 teenagers, a bit of necromancy, and an oddly sentient zombie apocalypse. Hopefully as I make more for this story, I will share more! Like all of my works (except for ATOTT), I have no current plans to make a comic or story out of this, but hopefully you all will enjoy its development nonetheless!

Characters, from left to right:

Laz, they/them, 16 (21? Recently revived)

Karumi, She/her, 15

Simon, he/him, 19

Salvador, Ze/zem, 18

A lot of people abandon good story ideas because the first version feels familiar.

Retired hero returns for one last fight.

Woman discovers her dead husband may still be alive.

Monster enters a small town.

Villain threatens the city.

None of those ideas are automatically bad.

The problem is usually that the concept has movement without pressure.

Events happen.

People run.

Buildings explode.

Secrets are revealed.

But nothing reaches underneath the character and tears open the reason this particular story must exist.

That is the work I am offering through my story and concept punch-up service.

I take your existing concept, character, dialogue, or short scene and help identify what is missing.

Not merely what could be added.

What is missing.

The personal trap.

The moral cost.

The contradiction.

The wound beneath the power.

The thing the villain understands about the hero that the hero has spent years refusing to admit.

A strong punch-up does not bury your idea beneath somebody else’s imagination.

It finds the most dangerous version of what was already hiding inside it.

A generic superhero comeback becomes a story about a man who can hear every cry for help—and therefore hears every person he chooses not to save.

A routine warning scene becomes a widow realizing the man she buried may still be alive, and that her marriage may have been less a love story than an alibi.

That is the difference between adding decoration and finding the engine.

My Fiverr service is for writers, filmmakers, comic creators, game writers, and anyone sitting on a concept that feels close but not yet inevitable.

I can help strengthen:

Story concepts.

Character motivations.

Villains.

Dialogue.

Scene tension.

Openings and endings.

Psychological stakes.

The emotional or moral consequence that makes the whole thing hit harder.

You do not need your idea replaced.

You may simply need somebody willing to look directly at it and ask the impolite question:

Where is the wound?

Currently, I’m at the starting point of a story with an emotion based magic system. This is gonna be a whole lot of unintelligible rambling:

Basically the idea is emotions are pieces of our soul that we can feel. People who have the ability to manipulate these pieces are known as mentalists, but they are more commonly called “super-feelers”.

You can tell what emotion a mentalist is tied to through their pupils, for example; a mentalist who manipulates anger will have red pupils. Brighter colored pupils = Stronger mentalist. So someone with neon red pupils would be stronger than someone with maroon pupils (at least at a base level, kinda like how a male can grow muscles easier but a female can still be more muscular than a male, for an example.) This is why ordinary people have black pupils, they have no way to touch the pieces of their soul, so they have no power.

Some people are born mentalists, and some people have an experience where they feel a particular emotion so strongly they become a mentalist. People can be predisposed to being a mentalist and trigger the activation of their abilities easier, requiring a less extreme moment of emotion.

There are two ways to manipulate your emotion; catharsis or cathexis. Catharsis is any style of manipulation that has the magic as an outside force like fire generation and manipulation. Cathexis is any style of manipulation where the magic remains inside the person’s soul or is transferred to another’s soul, like mind reading or healing. It is still considered cathexis if you imbue a soulless object with your emotions, like a sword.

Becoming a mentalist is emotionally-taxing, even if it’s linked to a more positive emotion like happiness. It changes how you behave even if it doesn’t change who you are. Some find this change anxiety inducing.

Premise: “funniest dynamic for arranged-marriage royalty… a queen who came here 100% prepared to murder her future husband and rule as a widow queen in her own right, only to discover that the king is autistic as hell and responds to her wish to rule with ‘oh thank god please do, I don't want to be bothered by these people. I can just tell them to go bother you instead, if you really want that. I've got beetles I wanted to study.’l

Character A: the daughter of the 2 lesbians from Story Idea #1. Was raised to be a “spare heir” of sorts, but was not intended to take over a district or the Tritaran Empire itself.

Had a somewhat minor military command and proved herself in combat multiple times, but was also raised to be diplomatic and consider nonviolent options. (Emphasis on “consider.”)

Elegant, poised, and deadly.

Tall, athletic, with a sculpted face and complexly braided hair. Strong hands. Chiseled abs, proud shoulders, and wicked thighs. Barbed tail.

Her warrior mom taught her to punch and she can absolutely take someone’s jaw off if she tries hard enough.

Her other mom, the Regalian, taught her about etiquette and the arts, and how to weaponized the ways people might underestimate her. And also poisons, she taught her lots about poisons.

Her public identity focused on her elegance and grace, not her military success. So, very few people know she’s that commander who won those battles and stuck it to that particular Amad asshole.

Character B: the son of another Tritaran warlord who is a bit older (not drastically by Tartarun standards) and was groomed to take over a portion of the Empire. He absolutely does not want it.

Was raised to be a fighter, but never excelled past average (which is below average for a Tritaran).

Can box well and has a wicked roundhouse kick, but fumbles melee weapons, and range weapons make his hands tingle, his ears ring, and his heart race.

H A T E S being in the public spotlight. Hates it. Too many people, too many questions, too many rules to follow. It’s exhausting.

Vastly prefers books, plants, dragons, and hellhounds to people and politics.

Doesn’t understand why anyone wants him to be king under the Arv’hein. He doesn’t want a command, he hates politics, he’s more likely snap at someone than hear them out (because he’s overstimulated and frustrated).

Had a short stint in the military but was mostly a cartographer and strategist.

i've done some changes on the map to incorporate distortions made by transforming a "sphere" into a flat plane, a problem also scene on maps of the earth. made the maharlikans (southeast asia) and Ainu's (japan) smaller than before and did some polishing above the northern parts of Rodenia (Russia), Mongolia, and Huanxia (China).