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Both Charles and Alex were curious about what race Jos was into but Max only explained it to Charlesโฆ๐คฃ
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[๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ต ๐๐๐๐๐ฟ๐ถ๐ฎ]
Both Charles and Alex were curious about what race Jos was into but Max only explained it to Charlesโฆ๐คฃ
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Just a heads up, for my moots!
I wanna make some self insert edits!
if I can, can you guys please tell me which character you want when I make them? :0
and if you donโt wanna be in an edit, let me know! Thank you!! <3
The current state of my WIP
Got rid of BB from the DickKory comic cover by Dan Mora :)
Edit: Removed BB's reflection from the water and added texture to it!! I'm sorry for the previous mistake- I missed it T-T
Wanted to see if i can make myself look like an album cover by heavily editing, i needed that mysterious "u can't see my eyes" touch to it.
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Self Edit Checklist
Structural:
Have I introduced my main character(s) early enough?
Have I introduced the world to my readers early and clearly enough?
Do readers understands my character motivation, protagonist and antagonist? What of their goals, traits (strength and weakness)?
Have my characters grow throughout the story? If not, is it intentional?
Will readers find my characters to be relatable, sympathetic, or interesting?
(I don't have to, but have I done my work to develop empathy for my villain both in myself in readers? Is it a cheap-out sad background story, or explored with more nuance?)
Are there plot holes, inconsistencies?
Are there scenes I overwrote?
Are there scenes I underwrote?
How have the conflicts of the story (external and internal) driven it forward? (Have they?)
What sentences, scenes, chapters donโt move the story along? Cut them.
Are each section/chapter told from its consistent point of view? (No headhopping)
Are there factual mistakes that require further research?
ok hello me and my husband
I donโt care if I canโt edit for balls I think itโs cute and sweet and I liked making the little frame for it fuck weโre so fucking cute maybe one day Iโll post the actual photos of me and him fuck ok meowww