I enjoyed the update! I went back and read the others pov and its interesting to see where they bite us. Is there a reason why? Also just love being inside their heads and seeing what they think.
Also hope you been doing well and taking care!
I’m glad you liked it! 💜
And yes, you could say there is a reason why each of them bites on a different place.
Derek bites MC’s hand because he kind of wanted to keep a certain distance between the two of them, both physical and emotional. Nothing too close and personal; he wanted something more formal or businesslike, drawing a particular line.
Max was pure impulse. He was nervous and wanted it to be over with (especially with a female!MC), and the neck, in his head, gave him the most room to just bite while not looking too closely where.
Alex thought the forearm was the safest place to bite. Nothing to personal that MC could disapprove of if they were conscious.
And in Jere’s case, it’s the shoulder because he saw MC didn’t have cuts there and thought something like, “They weren’t wounded here, maybe this place won’t hurt them as much as the arms.”
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How aware are the ROs if they have a crush? Do they brush it off? Lie to themselves? Or do they accept it?
Oh, this is interesting ✨
Derek: He will not notice at first. “It’s normal for me to worry a little about them, isn’t it? It’s also normal to notice things in other people, like their mannerisms, the way they talk, and their habits, and try to help them with things I know they don’t like. Of course, it also isn’t strange to want to spend more time together. Oh, look at that, they might like this. I could buy it for them... Oh no.” So, when he does notice his liking for that person, two things might happen. He could accept his feelings and try to talk it out with the other person... Or he could panic, try to deny it, and lie to himself, only making himself very evident to the other person.
Max: If his crush isn’t a woman? Everything is fine; he knows and accepts it. But if a woman somehow catches his attention? Well, two things can happen, although the ending will always be the same. He could lure said woman, get physical with her, and forget about her the next day. Or if he thinks his feelings might get the best of him, he will back away immediately. In the end, he will not allow himself to develop any kind of feelings. That doesn’t mean it cannot happen :)
Alex: He knows when he likes someone, and he has no problem admitting it to himself or the other person.
Jere: He takes a long time to realize when he has a crush on someone. It’s like: “Oh, here they come. It’s nice how they always manage to make me happy with their presence. How can I give them back even a little of the joy they bring me? Wait, my heart beat a little fast when they got a little too close to me. Huh. Probably nothing. Anyway...”
Siliva: She also notices pretty quickly when someone catches her eye. And at first, she doesn’t mind and goes with the flow. But things start to get serious? She backs away and denies everything, even if she’s already a lost cause.
Lorian/Locke: They don’t notice at first, but if they spend enough time with the person, they eventually do. And if they think it could be the right person, they won’t mind. Otherwise, they will bury their feelings deep down and try to get over it.
???: They know from the moment they start to think daily of that person. From the warm feeling that spreads in their chest at their memory. From the laughs, they share together. From the way they wish to see them when they’re apart. They know they’re a lost cause when they get lost in those eyes and smile, not minding one bit.
I just finished the game and when the scene where mc explain what Derek did wrong I had a mental image of him talking with a dictionary, I find it oddly cute and funny because I choose to make mc short, like a little dictionary...
Yup, basically ✨
Derek can be rather harsh with his words. Not always on purpose.
Like in Chapter One, MC will have more opportunities to be that dictionary to Derek 😂
Omg! Since you're back, could we get the ending to the fireworks scenario? If you're not busy, that is, I just wanna see the family together
Ahh, yes! I completely forgot I never finished it! ✨
Here it is the end! 💜
Part One | Part Two | Part Three | Part Four
“Jere!” Max shouts as he jumps off the balcony and looks at his brother. “Jere, please be careful with that! I don’t want you to get hurt!”
“I won’t!” Jere yells at him without turning around, putting the powder in the last few fireworks. “At least I don’t think so...” he says more quietly.
“Still, it’s not a good idea—”
Just as Max is about to run to Jere, Alex grabs him and roughly carries him over his shoulder.
“Leave the boy alone,” says Alex to Max, and he slowly walks to where Siliva is still restraining Derek.
“You big brute! Set me down!” Max kicks the air and pushes against Alex’s back to try and free himself. “That thing stinks of the witch’s magic! It’s dangerous!”
“Jere is a big boy. He knows what he is doing. And I went with him to see Krizia; it’s nothing too potent,” Alex says and starts to pat Max’s back in an appeasing way. “As long as you don’t put too much.”
“No!” Max yells as he goes straight to his captor’s weak point. His neck. He slides his fingers along Alex’s neck.
Alex falters momentarily, trying not to laugh or squirm from the touch. But that was all Max needed, as he successfully managed to slip from Alex’s grip and fall to the ground.
“Oh, you little—” Alex starts to say, but seeing Max quickly getting up and rushing to Jere, he launches himself and tackles Max.
Both land on the grass and start wrestling. Max tries to get free, and Alex to pin him to the ground.
“Jere,” you have retraced your steps and returned to his side. “Not to pressure you, but are you done?”
“Almost!” he answers. “It’s the last one!”
“Okay...” you mutter and look around once again.
Max and Alex are still struggling on the ground. Both messy and without their ponytails.
Derek still tries to push off Siliva a few feet away.
“Just— How—” Derek groans.
“Really, Dary, I’m not even trying,” says Siliva with mock disappointment. “I think you couldn’t even escape Lory/Locky.”
“Shut up,” Derek retorts, breathless.
“Mother will be very disappointed in you when she finds out,” she taunts him playfully. “It’s been a while since the last time you trained with her. And when she hears you’ve been neglecting your training, she will have you make up for the lost time.”
“Don’t tell my aunt—” Derek suddenly sounds panicked. “I’ve been busy. I—”
“She won’t go easy on you,” she teases him again.
“Done!” Jeremiah cries out victoriously, making you turn to him again. “All. It’s all of them. Now just—”
“The fire,” you continue for him, and realization descends on you both simultaneously.
“We don’t have fire!” Jere laments, throwing his hands to his head. “Now what?”
“I—”
“Young Master!” a voice calls out from behind you.
Delilah rushes towards you, holding a candle holder with a single lit candle. She tries her best to keep the candle lit as she navigates to you, dodging the two men on the ground and passing by Derek and Siliva.
“Damned woman,” Max says bitterly.
“Good job, Dela!” Alex laughs and calls after her, quickly returning his attention to Max when he tries to slip away.
“Delilah!” you say when she reaches you. “How did you know?”
“You haven’t been that quiet,” she laughs and passes you the candle holder. “But really, the Master told me to bring you this.”
You take a moment to look for Enrique, who’s by the house’s entrance with Lorian/Locke by his side. He catches your eyes and gives you a playful wink.
“Ready?” Jeremiah asks you, holding one of the fireworks in his hands. His eyes twinkled with excitement.
“Do it,” you answer, holding the candle for him.
“Okay, okay,” he murmurs. “Lit it with the image of what you want to see. Then to the sky it must be set free.” Jeremiah repeats the witch’s words as he lights the fireworks.
“Now!” you hurry him.
“Ahhhh!” Jeremiah screams as he hurls the firework into the night sky.
“What did you ask for?”
“I don’t know! I panicked!”
Then, a loud boom resonates in the night.
The squabbles cease. Everyone looks up into the sky.
In the darkness of the night, a multicolored dove emerges with its wings spread wide. It gives a few spins in the air before disappearing, flying on the horizon as it begins to fade.
“It’s so pretty!” Siliva says excitedly.
“I have to tell the others!” Delilah runs towards the house.
“It worked!” Jeremiah exclaims victoriously.
“A dove?” you ask him.
“When I said ‘it must be set free,’ it came to my mind ‘free as a dove,’” he laughs. “I mean, at least I think so.”
“Who cares?!” Alex suddenly yells. “Another! Jere, the one I wanted!”
“Right. Let’s see.” He takes another firework, lights it, and throws it to the sky with more confidence than before.
This time, the boom sounded more like a roar. It seems accurate as a big red dragon dominates the sky, moving its head up and down and finishing with its fire breath before disappearing.
“Sí!” Alex celebrates with a loud laugh. “It was worth it.” He then turns to look at the man trapped in his arms. “Will you now calm yourself and just enjoy the show?”
“Go to Hell,” Max answers without bite.
“Aw, such love,” Alex chuckles and finally lets Max go.
Both men stand up, Max trying to remove some of the dirt and grass on his clothes.
“Just leave it like that. You’re gonna take ages,” Alex teases him.
“I hate you,” Max says.
“I love you too, darling,” Alex laughs again as he throws an arm around Max’s shoulders and guides him towards you and Jere.
“Did you see, Dary?” Siliva shakes Derek excitedly. “The shapes moved! It looked so pretty!”
“I saw, Siliva,” Derek answers, looking around the garden and sighing in relief.
“The plants are fine, for God’s sake.” Alex rolls his eyes as he passes him.
“Lory/Locky! Uncle! Come to see!” Siliva releases Derek and turns to call them.
Derek begins to stretch his arms, but Siliva grabs him once again and throws her arms around his neck and shoulders.
“Let’s go see! Come on!”
And Siliva drags Derek towards you.
“What do you want to see?” Jeremiah asks you with a radiant smile.
“Let’s try a cat,” you say.
He nods, takes another firework, lights it, and hurls it into the sky.
By the time it explodes in the sky, everyone has gathered around you, all looking at the sleeping, curled-up blue cat in the sky. It wakes, stretches lazily, and takes off, running towards the moon as it begins to fade.
“Another!” Siliva laughs and jumps in excitement, still clinging to Derek.
He lets her be but moves closer, making sure she doesn’t fall.
“Livy, I think you’re strangling Derek,” Lorian/Locke says impassively as they come to stand beside them.
“I’m better than before,” Derek reassures them with a small smile.
Lorian/Locke nod in acknowledgment.
“Not trying to free yourself any longer?” Alex says to Derek with a taunting smile.
“I will not humiliate myself further,” Derek deadpans, and Alex laughs.
“I agree,” Max murmurs.
“Hey, you used to love hugs,” Siliva complains to Derek.
“Really?” Alex asks her in disbelief. “Mr. Don’t-You-Dare-Get-Too-Close?”
“Yes, he was so clingy as a kid!” Siliva says with a grin.
“That’s no—!”
“Yes, he was,” Lorian/Locke confirms.
Alex roars with laughter.
“Lorian/Locke never lie,” Max says, trying to hold back a smile.
Derek groans loudly and looks to the ground, a subtle red on his ears.
Enrique stands behind you and Jeremiah, placing a hand on your shoulders. He gives you a warm smile.
“What else have you got?” he asks you.
“Anything you want, Father!” Jere says enthusiastically.
And you spend the night throwing fireworks into the sky, illuminating the darkness of the night, and entertaining the moon with not just the changing colors.
Its a little odd that some if the ROs are like "i dont want you to drink it without knowing what it is" and then my MC goes "okay, what is it?" And then they just...dont explain what the blood is so she doesnt drink it? She would if it was explained but it wasnt told to her
Most of the Moonlight boys were like: “I want you to drink this because it is for your own good, but I don’t want you to freak out and don’t wanna do it when you find out what it is.”
Derek completely believes MC won’t drink that when they discover it is blood. And he can’t risk MC not drinking his blood, or blood in general, and jeopardize their own power’s development.
Max shares Derek’s opinion when he hears it, and agrees that maybe a little lie by omission won’t be so bad. After all, MC’s health is the most crucial thing.
Alex isn’t that convinced when Derek tells him to keep the blood thing a secret, and thinks it is unfair to ask the MC to trust that much without giving them enough proof they can be trusted. But he begrudgingly agrees with Derek because he knows Derek has more experience and decides to trust his judgment this time… which he may come to regret :) ✨
Jeremiah is the only one who doesn’t think it is right and doesn’t change his mind, no matter how much Derek tries. He doesn’t want to start his relationship with MC on lies and wants to give MC their right of choice whenever possible.
So, three of the four boys hide the fact that the vial was filled with blood from MC. And when MC finds out they lied to them (because yes, omission is also lying), of course, they can get mad :)
Was it dumb of them to hide it? Maybe.
This time, Jeremiah was the most responsible one, in my opinion 😂
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Hey, just a question out of curiosity. Is there a reason why there are four houses (not counting Mond, since there's only one member), but the ROs are only from two of them (with most from ours)? I absolutely love this IF, but I can’t stop thinking about it.
Well, basically, it’s because they are the only ones with whom a romance could work 😂✨
In the Moonlight family, there’s Enrique and his four sons. Enrique isn’t available for... reasons. (Yup, I thought of making him romanceable, and I still haven’t entirely discarded the possibility, but for now, that won’t be the case.) Meanwhile, all the boys were perfect candidates. One of them can save you; you’ll spend a lot of time with them and get many opportunities to get to know them. They’re all open to romance and have something the MC could help them with. They’re the easiest options.
The Delacroix family also has four “young” members. But of those four, a romance could only work with two of them, Siliva and Lorian/Locke. Since they spend a lot of time in the Moonlight house, you’ll also get more chances to know them than their siblings. Eira and Liath don’t go to your home unless on orders from their mother. And they’re not as approachable as their siblings, so I can’t really see a way to make a romance work with them. And I have other plans for them :)
And Belladonna is also a no-no. For... reasons, also.
Now, the Rosemerte have two “young” members, too, Ariel and Rose. But these also won’t work as a potential romance. Rose is, well, Rose: immature and acts like a child. Ariel’s heart is already occupied. And Madeleine and Rasen love each other. So they’re not options either.
And for the Lovelace family, there are only three members. Braxton and Ivonne are still happily in love, too. They’re open about an adventure with the two of them and a third one, but not romance, really. They just need each other. And Drausio isn’t interested in romance. He’s a workaholic; he just focuses on his duties, that’s all.
So, I created a romantic option of every character that allows the MC to fit nicely into their stories: Derek, Max, Alex, Jere, Siliva and Lorian/Locke.
Every other vampire has their own agenda, motives, feelings, and stories, in which it is hard or impossible for the MC to fit as a romantic partner.
I am pretty sure ??? is not the father but.. it would be sooo funny if MC is going to be a step parent to the others... and an actual, real step parent to Derek which I think is just funny because imagine that for that probably hundreths of years younger person, knowing nothing of being a vampire or themselves, suddenly being your step parent. And the way exspecially Alex would probably tease Derek about it.
Oh boy
Going from being the baby of the house to being the Father’s babe— I mean, Enrique’s lover 😉, hence possibly the other head of the house, would surprise the boys so much.
While in Mond’s hierarchy, only the head of the house would matter, inside that house, it’s another matter. Although all the boys would be respectful, that doesn’t mean they can’t tease each other, MC and Enrique.
And poor Derek would be the most confused of all.
Someone around his age, his human age, is the new partner of his father. And if he thinks about his and Enrique’s real age, MC is someone more than two hundred years younger than them, it’s even worse 🤣
And yes, Alex wouldn’t waste any opportunity to tease Derek about it, and MC, for that matter.
“You knew what you were doing, weren’t you? Not going for the heir, but straight for the head of the house. Clever, kid.” ✨
Have the ROs ever killed anyone? I’m assuming as a vampire they’ve done it but as a human? Would they care if MC had as a human?
Only Max and Alex have killed while still being human. It’s part of their background. It will be boarded in the game :)
As for the second question...
Derek, Siliva, and Lorian/Locke have the same time as vampires, which is... a lot. And they have more or less detached themselves emotionally from humans, so they would not mind if MC had killed before.
And while Max and Alex are significantly younger than the others, due to circumstances from their past, they would not mind either.
Jeremiah, however...
The poor baby would have so many conflicting emotions.
