#re-writing

Veep should be inciting laughs of glee within us, not break our hearts by destroying beloved characters. Lately, some of us may not be feeling the laughs and the gags on the show. Lately, you may find yourself not looking forward to Sundays. Lately, you may cringe in horror and your stomach may convulse when a certain character comes on the screen. As we edge closer to the series finale, we may have a few things that you want to change up, which is why I propose a Fix It Challenge.

What Is A Fix It Challenge?

Did you hate a certain scene this season? Were you disgusted by one of your favorite characters? Are you having massive heartaches because someone was a shit or was treated wrongly? If you, like me, were effected by this season, then I encourage you to write out all of the feelings you may have about it. Instead of feeling negative about it, take the time to really embrace the four good seasons we did have with these lovely characters and try to put your own spin on these scenes that desperately need a re-write. While we've dealt with some curve balls, we also had some really sweet and funny scenes throughout the series. If you have a scenario you really wanted to see, then write it out yourself and share it with the rest of the fandom because I can guarantee we all need a good read, especially after the Series ends! Now is your chance!

Here are the rules

1) The story has to be over 2,000 words in length.

2) It has to be a one-shot!

3) You need to choose one of the scenes below to fix.

4) You need to get it in by the required date - Due in by June 8th, 2019.

5) Have fun with it! If you've always wanted to write a fanfic, then now is your chance! If you've hit a writing block, then pick a scenario that ate away at you and overcome that obstacle. If you've read everything on AO3 or Fanfiction.net, then add your own spin to the fandom!

Scenes You Can Fix

1) The Scene In The Hotel In 7X01

2) The Scene By The Lake In 7X02

3) The Abortion

4) The Funeral In 7X06

5) The Ending You Want For The Show

What Do You Do When You're Done?

Post the story on AO3 or Fanfiction.net and send us the link, so we can enjoy your story! Also, don't forget to include the scenario you're fixing! And remember the deadline is JUNE 8th!!!

Today is cleaning day and exactly because of that, the whole house was turned upside down. In the living room, the sofa was raised and every box and junk that were in it now were on the floor; rags and papers were making a second carpet and a girl was sitting in the middle of the room. She looked young for her age of twenty-six...probably because of the clothes she was wearing – denim jumpsuit with stains from paint and black T-shirt. Her lovely blue wings with black on the edges were slightly stretched to keep her balanced while she was leaning nearly ninety degrees over a box, full of old photos and clothes. Something in the box caught her attention – old photo album filled with pictures. Her eyes sparkled when she saw who was on the pictures and she ran in the next room.

-Pan! Pan, look what I've found! - The girl yelled on her way to the bedroom, sweeping everything behind her with her wings.

-GYAH! - There was a startled cry, followed by the sound of a body hitting a soft surface.

-Pan-Pan? - The girl slowed when she neared the bedroom and looked around when she got in. There were pales of clothes and shoes on the ground and on the bed, the curtains were pulled away to be easier for the light to get in the room and the gentle June breeze was dancing with the flowers on the wide-open windows, sharing the flowers' sweet, sweet scent.

The girl jumped a little and made a shrill sound when suddenly someone appeared beneath the pale of clothes that was on the bed.

-Pan? What were you doing under these clothes?

-I was looking for Narnia when you called me... - The other person answered.

-Oh, Pandora... - The girl giggled and reached for something on Pandora's head. - You would look funny with my underwear on your head.

Pandora looked at the cloth that her girlfriend was holding and quickly turned her shocked and blushing face away.

-Lilith! - Screeched Pandora with a small smile on her face. - Don't wave them that way! Someone might see them! What if Mal entered the room?!

Lilith laughed, her ringing voice filling the house.

-We are all alone at home Pan-Pan. No one will see them. - Lilith touched her girlfriend's sharp chin and like with magic, Pandora turned to face her. Big mistake...now Pandora can't take her reddish-brown eyes from Lilith's sea blue eyes. - Or you want to see them? - Lilith added with husky voice.

It was hard to notice when the girls' faces started moving towards one another until Lilith's warm and soft lips touched Pandora's gentle but always cold lips. It always was so nice when they shared a kiss, the whole world disappeared and the only sound was their hearts beating in synchrony. Lilith's lips were always sweet and they always left Pandora's a sweet after taste every time they met her own.

However, at some point those gorgeous lips left Pandora's mouth and started traveling up and down her neck. Pandora let out a short moan and instinctively locked her fingers in Lilith's wings base, making Lilith pull away from Pandora's neck. She tried to breath in the air that just left her lungs and that resulted in her arcing her back towards Pandora.

-P-pandora?! - Lilith cried with small smile on her lips, the surprise still in her voice and on her face. - You know I'm sensitive there!

Pandora giggled and put her hands on Lilith's waist and hugged her with her right wing.

-I know where else you are sensitive, but I just can't resist you and the sweet sounds you make when I touch you between your wings.

-Oh, really? - Lilith smiled like a devil, who just found it's new pray and this wasn't unnoticed by Pandora.

-Lu? Lu, no. Don't. Don't do ahahahat!...

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Special thanks to: @niquedup3

Now that November is over, I can talk about the writing that I was doing for Chimera Academy. Since making comics is a long process, I primarily have been focusing on fleshing out the characters as it helps with my own writing and Were-Ah’s character designs. However, every once in a while (November especially) I sit down to write as many chapters or scripts as I can.

I had actually hoped to write five chapters (three of which were to be rewrites of already existing chapters). Unfortunately I didn’t manage that, but I did manage three chapters, two of which were re-writes and I consider that a large win.

Even though I keep saying this, I’ll say it again, it’s bizarre to be so comfortable now with doing rewrites, even though I had forced my own hand into doing so. See, when I first came up with Chimera Academy, there was a certain order in which Salron and Emmi would meet one of their professors, Sullivan, which was before classes started. This is because Chimera was based off of a tabletop campaign that never finished, and that was what had happened originally.

However, the more I thought about it, in terms of the flow of the story, the more I became unhappy with it. Especially, because the chapter previous was the four getting to know each other and promising to help each other with the stupid that is Chimera Academy’s education system. 

Yea that’s right, I’m the writer and even I know that this system is dumb as rocks, and I know why.

At any rate, I decided to change my own timeline, and the chapter after the one Were-Ah and I call Intermission, will introduce (sort of) the professors and one professor whom the readers will have already met by then. This did mean however, any chapter that would come after this point would have to be rewritten.

Was the look in his eyes.

"Good. I can't wait to show you my home."