#practice exercise

i redrew some homestuck fanart that I made when I was 16 lmao.

here’s the original

Hello! For me, using more dynamic phrasing was something I had to practice and keep an eye on to nail down–and I’m still not perfect at it.

But, here’s an example: “he got out of his chair and angrily walked over to her.” you would write something like “Rising from the uncomfortable wooden chair, he strode toward her, his fury blazing in his eyes.”

It’s a matter of practice. In that vein, there’s a link to some practice exercises I just created that may help more than me babbling on. Enjoy! (Also, anybody let me know if practice exercises on more simple topics would be something ya’ll would like to see when they come up in asks or are requested?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-b7Skz12DKg1h3T0Es1GJFIcsYIeK4qeUsDuWtl9gAs