For those who donāt know, I made a 41 point list of questions I got from watching MK11ā²s story, and I got into an exchange with another user over said points. (https://swindle94.tumblr.com/post/186753421775/the-questions-raised-in-mk11s-story-modeĀ ) I found that many flaws with the story as it had unfolded, and while I admit that a fair few of them were, in fact, nitpicks or even a little mad, Iām Still a little hung up on some of them. So in that spirit, Hereās just a general, jumbled and random bullet point list of what Iād do to the story of 11 if you put my happy ass in the writerās desk, and perhaps a design ideas desk before 4thsnake gets to it.
1. Iād make Kronikaās powers more consistent, or at least explain why they seem inconsistent. Maybe lay out what sheāsĀ āSaidā to be able to do, and then she can have a kind of epicĀ āTurns out I can also do this.ā Moment. Or maybe explain that after going through so many timelines (in some of which it is implied she almost lost/died) Her sanity is genuinely just going away.Ā
2. Iād add more factions and make the whole game a mad scramble to recruit everyone possible, certain actions in the story recruiting one group in the place of another. Red Dragon, Seidans, Zetarrens, The Naknada as a people, Cryomancers, Vampires, Riders (Ferra/Torr), etc.Ā
-An example would be something like Going to the Naknada or the Seidan resistance andĀ āTaking outā the otherās leader, who would end up escaping and joining Kronika. It would add at least a little flavor to subsequent playthroughs, always culminating in this massive charge of various different factions.Ā
3. Smoke, Sindel, Stryker, and Nightwolf are actually in this, but maybe establish that since Raidenās threat at the end of X there was some sort of schism between them and Liuās people, and maybe they abandoned their hate and whatever kept them impure using Nightwolfās guidance, possibly Ashraās, they lead some sort of heavenly army in the battle against Kronika.
4. Iād throw in a few past versions of more characters. Like Cyrax and Sektor? Maybe Cyber Kuai Liang? Really Establish that all these past versions of characters are from wildly different timelines. Ones where they still have MK9-ish attitudes toward being cyberized, But maybe have them alter their feelings as the story goes, Cyrax and Sub-Zero freeing their cyborg selves from Mecha Sektorās literally iron grasp on their minds, showing past Sektor that the Cyberizing should have been, if nothing else, less all-consuming.Ā
5. Dark Raiden stays. Can we just agree that him up and vanishing by chapter 2 was a bloody waste? DR bouncing off his past self would have been gold. Heās more willing to make deals with more devils than Kronika just to protect Earthrealm and its people.Ā
6. Iād make the Naknada from Seido instead of Outworld, Weāve seen so little of that realm that a new species not being in what you explore in Deception makes at least some sense, at the very least it would be better than Outworld having yet another species of humanoids just waltzing about.Ā
7. Just make Noob the past one. Maybe add the current one in as a sort of envoy for the gods, that would have been interesting. Noob from the past sees what he can become and just thinks his other,Ā āHolyā self is weak, IDK, but this basically just how Iād explain away where TF heās been all this time, the gods have been purifying and training him. Itād be a decent answer at least.Ā
8. I mentioned establishing that all the past characters are from wildly different timelines... Why not throw in ones that are āVery likelyā the one from the current timeline, so if something happens to that one, shit would get real? Itās just a case of figuring out which one is from a similar line and which one is actually your past self one to one.Ā
I will grant that this has the most potential to just make things way more confusing or annoying but TBH It also has the most comedic potential and the most for some really intense fight scenes in the game.Ā
9. Iād have Liu Kangās Revenant not steal his own soul. Iād straight up have them fuse together during a fight. The two of them and the Raidens fusing into a master of storms and flame. Two versions of Mortal Kombatās Champion and Two lightning gods, corrupt as two of them are, would make for one utterly devastating warrior, especially if the idea just comes to Raiden in the middle of a battle. (Basically just slightly altering Fire God Liu Kangās origin, I admit)Ā
10. Iād bring Mileena back and maybe have her join Kitanaās side after Kahnās death.
11. Iād have Kano explain thatĀ āEvery Marketā line a little better.
Those are most of the big ones, Iād appreciate some thoughts.Ā
Little Edit: 12. The boats. Iād definitely change that a little, have Kronikaās plan still involve tying up Kharon and all that, but I wouldn't have Cetrion randomly building this bridge over the blood sea, just establish that Kronika can make her own boats, but Kharon is the only non-titan at the moment who can fairy the forces of light.Ā
