#millicent collins

Act 1 isn’t 99% different like the recap so I’m not going to be transcribing the whole scene. Since there’s already so much to cover with this script I’m not going to point out every single difference that’s clearly a flub or when the actor changes like a single word in the line. For instance, instead of saying “Then - then let us begin again” Louis just says “Let us begin again.”  I’m also not going to go over every X-ed out thing, an most of them are just typos.

1-4: Bathia’s opening line is cut from the episode. The first thing said after the fade-in is Joshua’s “Let us begin again.”

1-5: Almost this entire page is cut. Bathia goes right from “And for me as well” straight into “But it would mean direct.”

1-5: The X-ed out text after Bathia’s (SMILING WRYLY) is Do you, and the block of it lower down says I must tell you, good sir, that I am far less willing than you to take up this combat again.

1-6: On air Bathia says “Then the battle would take place in the deepest recesses of the deepest darkness.”

1-6: Barnabas’s trance line is cut

The line that Bathia starts at the bottom of 1-6 that continues onto 1-7 is mostly cut. On air she only says “No, Mr. Collins, I can help no more.”

1-7 is also mostly cut. All that makes it to air is “No, Mr. Collins. I can help no more,” “I’ll give you anything you want - Money - anything,” and “I would help you if I could.” This is said to Joshua instead of Barnabas.

1-8: Barnabas asking for help and Bathia apologizing are cut

1-9: This all makes it to air, but when Barnabas says “I see myself!” his eyes remain open & staring into space. The X-ed out bit is me

The bottom half of 1-10 and the top of 1-11 are tricky. Everything is the same up through Bathia saying “Any disturbance would be fatal -” where it seems that Louis jumps the gun and skips some lines, cutting in with “Yes there - there will be no disturbance. I will find a way to reward you.” Bathia picks up at “My survival will be my reward...”

The rest of 1-11 makes it to air.

1-12: Only Bathia’s first and last line on this page make it to air.

1-13: Makes it to air verbatim

1-14: From this point on the character is typed Goodie but referred to as Bathia in hand written notes. The crossed out line does not make it.

 Millicent is not chewing on her hair