Shifting Scales: Part Seven - The Shattered Remains
Characters: Captain Capsize, Skipper Redbeard, Guardian Furia, Jordan Captainsparklez, Tom Syndicate, Tucker iijeriichoii, Lord Dianite, Sonja Firefoxx
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In the aftermath of decisions made, everything remains as it was, for better or for worse.
Jordan awaits a rescue doomed now to not arrive in time. The devil needs a loyal champion and he is willing to create one, however forcefully he needs to do so.
Sonja does her best to say focused on what needs to be done as her biting anger rises.
A reimagining of my original Mianite fanfiction ten years later
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Jordan sat with his knees pressed close to his chest. He had been stuck just waiting since Dianiteâs brief visit to force a decision from him. That mustâve been hours ago now. Since then, he had been left waiting, waiting for the moment he was pulled away from this place.
He knew he had made the selfish choice. The guilt from it had wormed its way into him in the time heâd been forced to sit with it, but it was necessary, he told himself. His Lady needed him to rescue her. If he swore himself to Dianite, he would be as good as dooming her. Capsize couldnât want that.
He reasoned that if she was truly willing to give her life for this rescue, if she was that devoted to their Lady, she understood the importance of it as much as he did. If she didnât, then she wouldnât attempt the rescue at all, and his decision wouldnât mean anything. All heâd really chosen was to leave the choice to her.
Besides, it wasnât as though he could be sure that Dianite was telling the truth. This whole thing could be a trick to get him to betray his Lady. A lie meant to turn him against his fellow Ianitee. Though as he attempted to tell himself that, the devilâs gleaming smile and short laugh after he made his decision replayed in his head and sent a lump of nausea down his throat. His thoughts then sounded just that bit less convincing.
The decision heâd made was the right one, the needed one. Then why did he feel as though he was being slowly chewed and spat out as he waited? Why couldnât he feel sure in the choice he had made?
The lack of distraction wasnât helping. The little dinner display Dianite had conjured the previous night had been magicked away just as quickly as it had appeared. The devil had smirked and told him he wouldnât be needing anything for his brief time left in here before his rescue, leaving the cell once more bare. Though Jordan had muttered that he didnât want anything he might give him anyway, now after a few hours of being alone with his thoughts, he wished he had anything aside from the chain locked to his ankle and the mockingly repeating red bricks to distract himself.
The nothingness just gave his thoughts ample time to twist into horrible knots. His sureness turned into something sticky and uncomfortable. Every question he shouldnât be asking was forcing its way into his mind. He tried to maintain his confidence, repeating and reassuring that he needed to be rescued for Lady Ianite to be restored, but as time stretched on, he started to dread the moment his surroundings changed.
He didnât know why. His escape, regardless of what it had cost, would be an unambiguously good thing. Except, if it happened, that meant at least some of what Lord Dianite had told him the previous night was true. Facing that left him so utterly lost. He didnât know if he wanted to live in that reality.
He shook himself. He was being ridiculous. Of course, he wanted to get out of here. No matter what. Once he was, it would become obvious that the devil had been twisting the truth. Then heâd stop feeling so lost. A change happening could only be a good thing.
Change did indeed come, but not in a way that offered him any relief.
Lord Dianite appeared in a black smoke that lingered, festering in the air in a bitter thickness. Jordan only managed to stop himself from coughing by experience around heavy flames, though the reoccurrence of those memories threatened to choke him just as the smoke did. He wasnât going to allow that sign of weakness, though.
Unlike his previous appearances, there was no sign of delight from the devil. He did wear a smile, but it could just as easily be bared teeth with how he stood with shoulders set. It seemed the air around him was boiling, threatening to explode with any movement.
Though his appearance still brought force the anger and fear in the champion as it had throughout his imprisonment, the obvious annoyance conjured an emotion far different. Something he had been severely lacking despite his desperate attempts to keep hold of it. Hope.
He rose to his feet, a fire in him that the devil had been attempting to smother. In this moment, his confidence was bolstered, back to the height it should be.
âYou lied,â He said, a smile breaking its way onto his face. It was completely undeniable. The devil had been caught in a bold-faced lie. He was ashamed that heâd let himself believe any of it in the first place, but now heâd realised the error in that, he wasnât going to let himself be tricked again. âCapsize doesnât have the ability to rescue me. You wereââ
âDo you really think Iâd tell such an easily proven falsehood?â Dianite asked, his gaze slowly turning to his prisoner. He almost sounded disappointed, like he expected more of him. Though, that didnât knock Jordanâs confidence at all.
There would be no reason for him to be here if his friends were actually attempting to rescue him. Heâd be watching them to ensure they failed. Or if he had somehow been telling the truth last night, heâd be standing by, waiting to tell them all how Jordan had sealed Capsizeâs fate to ensure his own freedom. The fact he was instead here with him obviously meant that the whole forced choice had been a farce.
Except, the devil gave no impression that heâd been caught out. Rather he just seemed frustrated. âYour girl most certainly tried to rescue you. She wouldâve been reduced to little more than a burnt husk had she actually finished her task.â
He was growling, seeing no reason to hide his anger at how the day had gone. It wasnât as though Sparklez was going to be able to tell anyone.
The little captain was supposed to be dead. All that spite and skill was meant to be reduced to a ruined corpse that even his sister couldnât revive into anything useful. Though she hadnât exactly been left in a condition that allowed her to be of any help to anyone, she would be able to heal and act a nuisance once more. This was not the total victory he had been looking for.
Jordan swallowed, reminding himself not to fall for any tricks this time. He just needed to stand his ground. If he could do that, then at least heâd be ensuring his Lady didnât lose any more strength from his wavering.
He stood, took a bold step towards his captor.
âYou expect me to believe that you chose to stop her?â He wasnât buying it. Heâd known when he was making his choice that Dianite would never willingly save Capsize, even if heâd betrayed his Lady for him. When he had literally chosen the opposite, given him free reign to let her finish the process no matter how big a sacrifice she had to make, he couldnât fathom why he wouldâve stopped her. So if sheâd had the power to teleport him out of here, she wouldâve succeeded.
Deep, mocking laughter filled the cell, the devilâs fury mixing with waves of disbelieving entertainment. Jordan refused to back down, even as the noise began to rattle his bones. The godâs eyes locked upon him, dark pits that Jordan couldnât pull his own away from regardless of how he tried.
âOh no, Sparklez. I didnât do anything to stop her,â He lent closer to the man who was attempting to deny reality. âIt was your friends who decided to stop your rescue.â
Jordanâs thoughts stopped all at once.
âNo. No, youâre lying!â It was another lie. It had to be. Just one more lie in a long line of those Dianite had told to try and force his loyalty away from his Lady. Why would his friends have stopped his rescue? That just didnât make any sense. If Capsize had a way to get him back, theyâd take it no matter how dangerous it was.
However, those black pits were boring into him. The devil was in no mood for his denial.
âSheâd barely even started before Firefoxx decided to try and rip this thing from her hand,â He pulled from seemingly thin air a charred flower. It couldâve been from anywhere; it could even just be something the devil had conjured out of nothing. But Jordan knew, he just did in his bones, that it was his rose held in the devilâs claws.
He couldnât believe the tale Dianite was spinning. It was beyond any logical thought to believe that his friends would save Capsize over him. However, as he tried to reassure himself of that, the flower, burnt and charred as it was, took a hold on his thoughts and began to cling to each thread of belief. They were caught on the thorns, turning to knots.
Why was he so sure it was his rose? It was hardly recognisable in its current state. Yet he could just feel that it was.
Why did he think that made Dianiteâs story more truthful? He couldâve just burnt it himself. Why wouldnât he have? After all, he was using it as a prop to try to convince Jordan that his friends had abandoned him. That seemed like motive enough.
Yet each and every reassurance he tried to give himself just made his throat tighten more. They hadnât all decided to abandon him, right?
âOnce their decision was made, I realised that plans had to change,â Dianite hardly seemed to be talking to Jordan. Rather it seemed as though he was simply speaking through his own thoughts.
Really, the god hadnât expected everything to play out this way. At this moment, he was supposed to be mocking his sister that her champion had chosen for her precious little messenger to die to save his own skin. Watching her delicious devastation about that, her rage that she couldnât even punish the one who had gotten her favourite follower killed. That feast had been stolen away from him in an instant.
This result wasnât entirely to his disadvantage, of course, but it did require him to make some changes. He wasnât about to have his own strength drained from the fallout of all of this. âWorse than the fox interfering, my own champion decided to play hero.â
Jordanâs thoughts turned to white noise.
âWhat?!â He squeezed out. There was as much shock within him as annoyance. Despite what he had been told the night prior, his mind still leapt to bitterness at the idea of Tom interacting with Capsize. As usual, it didnât fade, though now for a different reason than jealousy. This was a far more dangerous bitterness.
Heâd never thought that Tom was so devoted to his Lord that he would betray him like this. He shouldâve known. Who swore themselves to the devil if they werenât willing to betray their friends? But stillâŚ
Lord Dianite could feel the festering anger and was glad for it. The next step would be so much easier if he was already filled with betrayal.
âI wonât abide by a disloyal follower, but especially not a disloyal champion,â He could hardly keep himself from smiting the treacherous idiot. What did he think he was achieving by aiding the little thing loyal to his sister? He had to know that wasnât how his champion was supposed to act.
Well, it didnât matter anymore. He could have whatever fun he wished with the pirate, broken as she had been left. His title was going to be taken by someone better, someone who hadnât liked his sisterâs most loyal follower in the first place. âThankfully, though, champions are quite replaceable. Isnât it lucky that youâre still here?â
Just how hungry those eyes were suddenly hit Jordan. He attempted to take a step backwards, but he found his body completely frozen, held in place by the devil once more. He gritted his teeth.
âIâve made it very clear that Iâm not joining you,â He spat. No matter how many times he was forced to repeat this, he wasnât going to change his answer. His loyalty remained with his Lady. He was never going to betray her.
Except, Lord Dianite laughed. He laughed longer and harder and louder than he ever had. He grabbed a hold of Sparklezâ hair, pulling the man painfully into the air.
Jordan couldnât struggle despite the pain, his body still frozen rigid. He was completely helpless as he was brought to be eye level with those pitch-black voids.
âDo you think youâre getting any choice in the matter? I gave you a chance to do this nicely, but Iâm not waiting any longer. Youâre going to be mine if I have to tear you apart and restitch you together,â He stopped for a moment to smile, displaying each and every one of his jagged teeth. âDonât worry, youâll get to see my sister one more time when I let you deal the final blow.â
Without leaving a moment for the man to argue, Dianite pressed a claw into his forehead.
Jordan felt a horrible splintering. It was as if a new being was attempting to force its way into his mind. A being made up of all the worst thoughts heâd ever had. He couldnât fight or thrash. Even trying to think about anything other than his anger at the others hurt.
All he had that he could do was scream until he was finally given the mercy of blacking out.
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Sonja watched her brewing stand with mild frustration that the process couldnât go faster. Normally, she brewed potions in the background while doing other tasks, but right now, she couldnât focus on anything but making sure these ones got brewed. Anytime she tried to distract herself, she would quickly settle once more in front of the stand. However, the snailâs pace at which they were coming to a boil was driving her to the point of insanity.
She hadnât wanted to separate from the pirates at all, not when Capsize looked injured enough that a prick from a wayward thorn could finish her off. Except, if she wanted to help her recover, she needed to brew potions. Given that the pirates didnât have any brewing supplies, she needed to leave them, even if just for a little while.
Sheâd settled on regeneration potions, the recipe altered slightly to make the effect take longer. As much as she wasnât a doctor, or really a healer of any kind, she knew from experience how instant healing potions felt when used for a major injury. They hurt about as much as the injury being inflicted in the first place, even if it then felt fine afterwards. It didnât seem like the ideal way to heal multiple broken bones when they had the time to use a slightly slower method. Especially not when sheâd started to gather that the pirates had a significantly different pain tolerance than her and the others. So, a slow but hopefully less painful regeneration it was.
Obviously, she knew how to make these potions. However, when she needed to have them quickly, the speed that the process went was driving her insane.
Even with her annoyance, soon enough the liquid in the glass bottles turned to that familiar purple that let her know the process was done. She didnât wait for them to cool before plucking them from the stand, ignoring the slight sting they caused her hands. She wasnât wasting anytime in getting them to the person who needed them.
Or rather, she didnât intend to be delayed by anything, but as she was leaving the room, her focus fully locked on moving, she was stopped. A hand grabbed her arm, yanking her back.
She spun, ready to attack whoever it was. She couldâve found herself facing Lord Mianite himself and she still wouldnât have hesitated. The face she was greeted by was only enough to stop her from immediately launching a fist at them, though it in no way quelled her annoyance.
âWhat do you want, Tucker?â She asked as she yanked her arm from his grip. She wasnât in any sort of a mood for him right now, not when he had already prevented her from helping once today.
He had the nerve to look as annoyed at her as she was at him.
âI want an explanation for why the hell you decided to stop Jordan from being rescued,â He demanded. Heâd attempted to get this out of her earlier, right after Dianite had disappeared off with their only hope of rescuing Jordan, but sheâd rushed off with the pirates, and heâd been left to pick up the pieces with Tom.
He maybe couldâve tried to fish the same answers out of the zombie, but he wasnât exactly in a fit state to be answering questions. He was lost, rejected by his god despite how, frankly, preventing Jordanâs rescue should be precisely what the devil wanted. Still, Tucker had managed to hold off his annoyance while comforting Tom, assuring that he didnât need Lord Dianite and was probably better off without him.
Now though, he couldnât wait any longer. He was going to get some damn answers about this, and Sonja was obviously the one who should give them. She was the one who had attempted to stop Capsize first and the one who had encouraged Tom to do so as well. She was basically the reason Jordan wasnât currently with them.
Except, Sonja, seeing his anger and hearing his demand, laughed. A bitterness that had been rising within her was allowed to escape. She couldnât believe he had the damn nerve to demand answers out of her.
âI was stopping Capsize from dying,â She spat at him, disgusted that he thought there was anything wrong with that. He had witnessed the exact same thing as her, the pirate captain beginning to ignite. Yet somehow, heâd found it appropriate to physically stop her from helping. Seriously, what did he think she was going to say? âRescuing Jordan isnât worth her life.â
Tucker narrowed his eyes.
âWe donât know that she wouldâve died,â He said, anger held between his teeth. âAnd any sacrifice is worth getting our friend back.â
Sonjaâs typical friendly demeanour began to evaporate, leaving Tucker facing an anger he hadnât before. She seemed to grow taller as she squared her shoulders, all but baring her teeth as she showed sharp canines. Her fur stood on end as she resisted the urge to tear his throat out.
âIs Capsize not also our friend?â She growled, leaning closer to him, making him crane his head up to meet her eyes.
âOh, come on, you know thatâs not what Iâm saying.â
âThen what are you saying?â
Tucker attempted to back away but found himself pressed against a wall. Heâd never seen Sonja act like this before. Not even in purges when they were completely free to let loose any anger they might have. She was acting more like an animal than a person. She was⌠He didnât want to be stuck this close to her.
âBecause it sounds like you think we shouldâve let Capsize die to get Jordan back,â Her pupils appeared to be consuming her entire eyes as she struggled to keep herself from taking this further. This frustration had been bubbling under the surface for quite some time now, but normally she had the ability to keep herself calm. Today, though, today had been a tiring one. She just didnât have the energy or the want to hold back anymore. âWhat? Is her life worth less than his because she isnât a champion?â
âWhat? No, of courseââ
âReally? Because thatâs exactly what you seem to think,â They always acted like they, the champions of the gods, were the most important people in the universe. No one else mattered quite as much as them. Now apparently Tucker thought that other peopleâs lives were literally worth less than theirs. âWe both know that Dianite isnât going to kill Jordan, but it seems very clear that he wants Capsize dead. So, if you excuse me, Iâm going to heal her up so he canât finish the job.â
With that, she turned on her heel and stormed off. She was so fed up with dealing with this. The gods didnât care about them equally, now apparently Tucker wasnât pretending to either. This had to end. If she had to be the one to make an actual change then so be it.
For now, though, she had to help Capsize.
Tucker watched her go with a shaky breath. Just for a moment, he swore that her shadow lunged for him, but that mustâve just been his imagination. It had, after all, been a long day for all of them. Sheâd be more reasonable in the morning.

















