Just wanted to say I have enjoyed your next-gen au. The designs are awesome,I love all the small details,like Mel and Manny have heterochromia,with one brown and gold eye each,and how they both have similar hair colors to Amity while having brown under it. Also, thank you for making them twins,the idea of lumity twins doesn't come up often in these types of au.
Now for a guess and a theory
My guess for the upcoming comic:Mel helps Manny, but their this unspoken jealousy between them
My theory for the au going forward:One plot line is that Mel is jealous of Manny,not only because he can actually do magic while she has to rely on glyphs but also for how close he is to Luz and Amity and how she feels like the outcast in her family,which will lead to Mel getting manipulated and falling out between the twins
Sorry if this was a bit long
Posted the comic already but still wanted to answer lol. Thank you so much for liking the twins, + the heterochromia. Thought people would find it cringe at first but I’m glad people like them! You were also pretty spot on about her jealousy 😭 She definitely feels like an outcast a bit and in Manny’s shadow. She looks up to her moms a lot and always wants to prove herself. She will get manipulated in the future because of this but no spoilers on who 👀
As for the length it’s fine ^^
