Obedience Beneath the Sun – Maksoud's Test
The sun rose without mercy. It did not glide above the field with grace; it commanded the sky, pouring molten light over the golden pitch like judgment. Maksoud had risen before it, as he always did. In silence, with reverence. He had pressed his tunic until no fold defied order, traced each thread of golden trim with steady fingers, and knelt thrice in quiet breathwork before stepping into the day. He was ready. He was always ready.
Assigned to the southern edge of the field—the training perimeter, where the stone curved into a shallow prayer alcove—Maksoud stood sentinel. Others ran drills. Waterboys ferried ice buckets with giggles and half-tucked shirts. Mascots lounged, fanning themselves with golden foam hands, panting beneath synthetic fur. But Maksoud did not stir. His white tunic shimmered like a beacon of obedience. At the center, a sculpted teardrop-shaped opening—edged in gold piping—revealed the upper chest, where a golden-orange spiral glowed with gentle luminescence. It pulsed softly, not as decoration, but as a sacred mark of surrender, embedded into flesh. The number "70" lay embroidered above his heart, symbolic, silent, final.
A wide golden sash cinched his waist, inscribed in firm Arabic: "مقصود" —Maksoud, The Intended. It clung to his form with a growing intensity, each thread catching sweat like molten links. His white trousers, tapered and loose at the calves, bore no stain. Even the soft white slippers upon his feet seemed unfazed. Around his neck, just barely visible beneath the collar, a fine tattoo of golden chain links circled with silent strength—a symbol of eternal service etched into skin.
The world pulsed. Heat shimmered over turf. Every inhalation was a flame; every exhalation a prayer. Still, Maksoud remained upright. His posture a scripture. The sandstone beneath him might as well have been forged for his knees alone.
Time became breath. The breath became chant.
"Obedience brings peace. Submission is sacred. Ritual is joy."
He did not speak. The words did not leave his lips. But they vibrated within, summoned like sacred echoes from the very marrow of his bones. Sweat traced perfect lines down his cheekbones, catching the glint of noon like falling stars. His deep-set eyes, golden and unwavering, stayed fixed on nothing. He did not need to look to know.
He felt the presence before it appeared.
Sayyid Ezan, haloed in golden glare, approached without sound. Not as man, but as test. As flame. As will. Maksoud did not falter. His knees touched stone in one flowing motion, palms pressing flat to his thighs. Fingers aligned. Spine upright. Gaze downturned. Devotion in flesh.
"You have not sought relief," Ezan observed. His voice was soft, but it carried like thunder inside Maksoud's ribs.
"This khadim finds clarity in fire," Maksoud answered, each word wrapped in breath and duty.
Ezan stepped closer. The heat doubled. Tripled. Maksoud's vision blurred into gold. The world narrowed to sweat, stone, and the intoxicating hiss of his breath against silence.
Then came the touch.
A single finger beneath the chin. Lifting.
"Look."
Maksoud obeyed. And in that gaze—in the perfect symmetry of Sayyid's golden eyes reflecting his own—something shifted. The heat did not leave his skin. But it no longer punished. It revealed. It purified. Maksoud felt the last tremors of ego dissolve, not in collapse, but in sanctification.
He had not broken.
He had become.
Beneath the relentless sun, Maksoud knelt. A statue carved of submission and sweat. A servant not shattered, but perfected. Others would falter. Others would seek shade, fan their skin, peel uniforms from slick backs.
Maksoud would kneel.
For this was his place.
And in obedience, he found his cool.
