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First round of critiques are also back from my group and being worked on. Second segment is out; they’re going to tell me what they think of the Khurana sisters and Buroni Hakir, as well as Alizarin’s atrocious behavior in the port bar.

I didn’t give them the transitions because I already know I need to scrap and re-write those segments. It worked just fine in a tumblr format, but in a full novel I’ll have to put some serious effort into having time pass.