Chapter 1:

-Awww, thanks for the nice words! Yes, I can confirm that I approved of this- you can see my comment under the chapter

Chapter 2:

-Okay this gives off MAJOR pretty cure vibes, I like!

-THE PARTY PACT IS GENIUS NAMING!!!!

-"While spunky and enthusiastic, she was often plagued by anxieties surrounding being a reliable partner to the Magical Warriors. She had been doing this for about ten years without a lot of luck before, after all…" (yeah Pippiri is a goddamn mood)

-“It’s not that.” Celebatori sighed. “Brutto, or ‘Buzz’, as he truly went by, has long since become incapable of harnessing darkness to that degree ever since he was saved. The darkness we’re picking up on is merely a remnant of his power.” (YEAH. BUZZ WOULD BE THE EVIL PRECURE GENERAL. yknow the type. The kind that's the young annoying boy who is always pissed and cocky- think Ira, Daruizen, et al)

-jolipare sounds like tippet with the way he's interacting- i love stuffy british men!

-Misty sighed. Okay, so Pippri and Jolipare didn’t understand Jackbox’s… ways. (me when i have trouble worldbuilding jackbox live shows in the robodoki verse XD)

Chapter 3:

-i got emetophobia confused with arachnophobia for a brief second- still appriciate the disclaimer but god i need sleep lmao

-oh hey, another avery! @whocaresifwearecrazy and i were talking about this earlier.

-love the descriptions of the characters!!! You're good with language!

-oh god. is the master mentalist gonna be corrupted.

-i'm bracing for it.

-...okay, not MM. Nice red herring! 99% sure it's Guy Towers- I see a LOTTA orange in their designs (mine included XD)

-"They looked down at Jolipare’s hair tuft and tail suddenly standing on end. “I always get awful tremors when darkness is afoot, pare.” (meanwhile Aianna gets literal heart attacks LMAO)

-THE TRANSFORMATIONS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAFMIWFNGIWNWINKGONIPWMJDPOJFW{OWGJOGWMGIEMSVIMn (a /pos KEYSMASH ITS SO GOOD IT REMINDS ME OF PRETTY CURE)

-“Even when we did a whole new routine for it on the fly?” (WAIT WHAT HOLY SHIT THIS IS NEW?!? GOD i feel so SPOILED!!!)

-“Similarly, I got trousers… I was getting quite used to the skirt, you know.” (fun fact: all the robodoki people get skirts because I am too lazy to design shorts to match the team's uniform outfits- since the skirts usually have hipswags and all. sorry for intruding with that fact but it just came to me)

-“I already gotcha!" “YOU PROBABLY DON’T!” (they seem like siblings in the best way possible!)

-mindfuck incoming!

-🎶"look at this loser, drin-king coffee! (beat) now it's de-caf!"🎶 /ref /ly

-“I SWEAR to the stars I’ve seen a show like this before,” Flare shrugged. “Didn’t it involve butterflies and-” (okay, colored, real talk. i give you FULL permission to reference robodoki like this. in fact, I ENCOURAGE IT!!! WOOOOOOOOO!)

-okay but saying colored like that makes me feel wrong actually don't take that outta context :P

-JERRI WITH THE ONE G IS A BARRIER MAIDEN- THAT MAKES SUCH THEMATIC SENSE AND MY ENGLISH LIT DEGREE HEART IS GOING KYUN KYUN RIGHT NOW!!!!

-cosmos is such a fucking madlad. also highlights the reason why i never drink coffee.

-“DON’T GIVE AWAY YOUR IDENTITY, PRI!" “WHEN WERE THERE EVER ANY STAKES FOR THAT, ANYWAY?!” (PFFFFFFFFFFFFFT! Yeah I gave up on that after the 10th chapter or so on my end LMAO)

-Ohhhhhh it's Cookie! Gotcha.

-PRISM RODS!!! In my head, they look like those You And Idol batons or whatever they're called.

-COSMOS PURIFICATION IS SO GOOD!!! THE BADASS FINGER SNAP, THE DESCRIPTIONS, SHD(UGEH@UHFIEOWHNEOIWJFOIJ

-They are SUCH a family holy shit /POS

In conclusion: THIS IS SO GOOD AND I FUCKING LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I'M SO HAPPY I HAVE A FIC TO READ ON AO3 THAT ISN'T THAT ONE-SHOT TONY STARK MIRACULOUS FIC I ACCIDENTALLY CLICKED ON (DONT ASK) WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!