Poems of a Machine; Laments of a person:
Lyrical analysis
Shorter project because I felt bad I hadnât finished anything in a while:
Roses are red
'Guess still there's no use, my dear comfy bed
Violets are blue
Electric sheep cannot be true
The books I read
Told me there is hope as long as I live
Faces of you
Is that what you call a "muse"?
First, the title links directly to the first line and structure of the song itself, being much akin to a poem (or a series thereof) and within the first verse of this song is what I would argue is the most recognisable poem of all time.
âRoses are Red, Violets are Blueâ, juxtaposes the natural imagery of the phrase itself with the âMachineâ in question singing the song.
The latter half of this poem âSugar is sweet/and so are youâ could potentially be referenced in the second last line of this verse itself, addressed to âyouâ as a muse.Â
The intermittent phrases between the two flowers:
'Guess still there's no use, my dear comfy bed [...]
Electric sheep cannot be true
Can too be seen as a singular phrase. The latter of the two is of course a lamentation of the nature of the singer (Angela) as mechanical, relating back to the themes and story of Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep (see previous work about Angela).Â
The former can be seen on its own that one canât simply waste away and spend time in their comfort, needing to leave their bed to live, however the fact of their interspersion leads to the potential reading if these lines are linked. Thereâs no use in sleep like as a human, after all she never needed to.
âElectric sheep cannot be trueâ could too link to the idea of how the bed acts as a comfort, some kind of note about sheepâs wool and pillows/mattresses.Â
Those two lines could too be linked to the later lines of the same verse, which act as a cohesive phrase.
The books I read
Told me there is hope as long as I live
The books in question of course relate back to the books of the Library itself, the life stories of each and every person who was received written out plainly are what taught Angela that there isâwill beâhope so long as she continues to live and find a purpose.
The second half of these lines:
Faces of you
Is that what you call a "muse"?â
Can be read in various ways depending on oneâs own reading of Angela. Fun fact, the google doc I write the Angela series in is called âTrans analysis of Angela and associated literature/storiesâ, which is exactly how weâre going to read this line.Â
The idea of a âmuseâ is one who plants an idea within her mind, which we may understand as Carmen or the light in itself. Angela, being a simulacra of Carmen, strives towards her ideal, sparked by the face that she sees and wishes to become, the face of humanity, to become truly a human.Â
The face that she sees is in nature her own, or her idealised face. Such is to say, transition goals. (Note: Angela can be read as transmasc and transfemme in different readings, I simply personally lean towards transfemme in these interpretations (at least until I make a follow up) due to my own lived experiences, hope you all understand).Â
Tick tock tick tock
No need to overclock
My wish is locked
Only your time passes by
I'm in the rye
Spinning round and round, round and round
Pretend I don't need golden rings
Re-experiment
Only this time I'll play nice
And I'll be brighter than the city's book-powered fires
So here I lie
Reading you my poetic stupid rhymes
The relationship to time is one fairly evident throughout Angelaâs story, punctuated very explicitly by the fourth line about how âOnly *your* time passes byâ, implying stagnancy or, alongside the prior lineâs allusions to locks, that she is trapped in some kind of position.Â
Thereâs some nice parallel ideas in the first two lines as well, the âTick tockâ linking both in rhyme and concept to the latter half of the âOverclockâ.Â
The term overclock too relates back to the idea of her artificiality, or rather of her nature being a machine, asking not to be overclocked (by extension, to be exploited or used harshly). The relationship between the allusions towards time and locks may too be in reference to a time lock, she may only ever reach her wish after enduring such lengths of time in torment.Â
I'm in the rye
Spinning round and round, round and round
Pretend I don't need golden rings
Re-experiment
Only this time I'll play nice
Here, the first of these lines in the latter half of the verse is most likely an allusion towards Catcher in the Rye. Principally the novel is about the loss of innocence, specifically in oneâs transition into adulthood, however the same concept and thematic may be extended to transitions of other kinds as well; The Catcher In the Ryeâs primary concern with the world surround itself is one of alienation and ârealityâ or lack thereof, Holdenâs detachment from the people surrounding him and all that he considers âPhonyâ is a shield to protect him from the harms of connection, and engaging in the masquerade that is human interaction, while at the same time these beliefs prevent him from forming the connections that a human needs to survive, all the while still possessing a âphonyâ mask such is to say a persona by which he prevents connection.Â
Angelaâs âinnocenceâ could too be interpreted in her lack of true knowledge or understanding of the City and those within it, one that she comes to understand throughout the course of Ruina itself, thus transitioning into a humanâan adult, a woman, a personâand thus no longer caught in the rye.
(Donât worry Iâm not turning this into a fully fledged parallel analysis like last two times)Â
The following four lines are reflective of Angelaâs own entrapment and learned worthlessnessâas âPhonyâ as that mask of being an unfeeling machine may beâcircling in the ryeâthus refusing to mature as a person, to be vulnerable and form real connections with othersâgoing in circles spinning like a merry go round.
âRe-experimentâ too reflects this idea, the seed of light being an experiment, the receptions within the library being an experiment in turn, and the former having her forced to âplayâ a role of machine, the latter, though she wishes to be less âphonyâ than in her former lifeâto be herself anewâplacing her the role of librarian, one that she truly believes is more âfairâ than that of before.Â
The line of âplay niceâ can be interpreted in both these manners.
And I'll be brighter than the city's book-powered fires
So here I lie
Reading you my poetic stupid rhymes
The line of book-powered fires is fairly straightforward. Whilst I could connect it to Fahrenheit 451âs book burnings, I feel that is making an unnecessary step in the logic; Historically, book burnings have been used to rewrite history, to maintain regimes and suppress any opposition or âunwantedâ groups. This links back fairly clearly to the City, the blood of so many which oils the gears of the greater whole, and to the refusal to acknowledge Angelaâsâor any robotâsâhumanity.Â
At the same time, Angelaâs Light is too powered by the burning of otherâs books. She gains from endingâdestroyingâthe stories and books of the cityfolk in the same manner. The mechanic within Ruina itself is to âburn booksâ after all, we are once again found with the dichotomy of the City being no different from Angela in its nature, but Angela too is neither different from the cruelty of the city. Â
The last two lines of this verse reflect the same concept as afore stated. Itâs poetic in the ways that they match, the City and its people, and Angela.
This song out of all of the To Kill a Living Book songs too has a more defined and consistent rhyming scheme, adding to the conceit of it being a âpoemâ (Or poems).Â
Once again we also see the self image in âstupidâ poetic rhymes. Iâm certain everyone has at least heard someone say âitâs nothing, it's stupidâ as to why theyâre feeling a certain way.
I stopped for Death
'Guess still there's no place for my silicone flesh
Liquor I brewed
Can't taste it though I bet it's something new
Marionettes
Cut down all the strings, rewrite their presets
Phases of the moon
We lived in a dead cocoon
I swear itâs the songs, it's not just me doing this but the first line of this verse is a reference to another poem. âBecause I Could not Stop for Deathâ. The third and fourth lines make reference to âI tasted a liquor I didnât brewâ as well, both of these poems by Emily Dickinson.Â
âBecause I could not stop for deathâ or âThe Chariot" is a poem known largely for its portrayal of âdeathâ as a kind and gentle figure, something calm and measured. The opening stanzas:Â
Because I could not stop for Death,
He kindly stopped for me;
The carriage held but just ourselves
And Immortality.
We slowly drove, he knew no haste,
And I had put away
My labor, and my leisure too,
For his civility.
The author could not stop for death itself, things left undone, needing to be finished, but death as inevitable as it is would stop for them. Itâs important to note that this poem has multiple interpretations, many of which are centred around lines 3/4 of the poem and the figure of âimmortalityâ.Â
In order to not dissect the poem in whole with potential linkages, the important aspect of the poem is the line from which is borrowed in Poems of a Machine, âI stopped for Deathâ.
This line mirrors that of String Theocracy, as well as the ending of both Library of Ruina and Lobotomy Corporation, after she has found and finished her âpurposeâ or task.
When does it end for me?
Hmm
I think I am done with everything
Now I'm ready to leave
Such is to say that, despite having finished, despite stopping herself, death was not to come for her âSilicone fleshâ, once again a callback to her synthetic nature, with the line itself referring to her lack of a place, acting as a returning idea that she was never rewarded or acknowledged within Lobotomy Corporation.Â
The second poem referenced, âI Tasted a Liquor I didnât Brewâ is a poem which uses alcohol to be analogous to joy itself, or rather an appreciation of life and nature. Once again the line in question is inverted, âLiquor I brewed, canât taste itâ.
This in my eyes refers back to the events of Lobotomy Corporation and Ruina, Angelaâs longing for life and happiness, her purpose to create it for everyone except for herself, who would never taste the light of the sun like as in the poem.Â
Till Seraphs swing their snowy Hats âÂ
And Saints â to windows run âÂ
To see the little Tippler
Leaning against the â Sun!
Marionettes
Cut down all the strings, rewrite their presets
Phases of the moon
We lived in a dead cocoon
Marionettes refers back to Angela, taking control of her own life and thus âcutting the stringsâ
This is too a link back to String Theocracy, hencefrom Angela refers to herself as a marionette again:
Sure I'll be your marionette
Here, tug on my thread
Spread me open for dolly pink, snow white artificial beauty
Phases of the moon is once again in reference to time, with the moon slowly changing over time as months pass in turn. The idea of a âdead cocoonâ is too comparable to Lobotomy Corporation itself, a place made for change which is set in stagnancy.
This imagery of a cocoon too invokes images of transformation, which could liken the cocoon to the Library itself, something that was to change Angela into something anew, yet now acts simply as a husk.Â
Tick tock tick tock
No need to overclock
My wish is locked
Ever dreaming to taste the sweet nectar of morality
Allowed my heart to hold enough love to be broken
Maybe I'll try getting drunk
Finally I'd cry for help
From the top of my simulated lungs.Â
The line 4/5 of the second chorus here are some of my favourite lines of all time I want to just note. âAllow my heart to hold just enough love to be brokenâ ironically, broke me at one point.
The line of the sweet nectar of morality has two lines of thought in my mind. The garden of Eden, the fruit which gave humansâfor lack of a better phraseâhumanity in the nature of free will. Angela is divorced from morality in this traditional sense, she cannot choose to enact her will for the longest time; The second line is that of her artificiality. Morality itself is corrupt within the city, but even still the most moral thing one can be is âhumanâ.
This concept was explored in the String Theocracy analyses, that no matter how inhuman âhumanityâ remains, they are allowed the privilege of moral choice, and that is what allows for good and evil, for morality in whole, to exist.Â
The line after this is returning to the same idea we explored (strong word(?)) afore on The Catcher in the Rye, and in part 1 of String Theocracy analysis. It is better to hold what love you can at risk of losing it than it is to never love at all.Â
Being closed off from all other people will prevent your heart from hurtingâit will prevent your heart from feeling at all. Being connected to other people will allow your heart to hold love, even if that allows for you to lose it.Â
The line âmaybe Iâll try getting drunkâ too links conceptually back to the concept of being âdrunk on lifeâ, the ability to enjoy things and relish in your own existence, to taste the liquor that you didnât brew, or even to taste the one that she did.
The final verse of the songÂ
Only your time passes by
And from my eyes the oil leaked
Tell me why, tell me why, tell me why, tell me why
Tell me why, tell me why
A malfunction
Only this time I'm smiling at your side
To know that I would someday be gratified
So here I lie in our imperfect paradise
A eulogistic lullaby
Makes more reference to machinery, highlighting the nature of Angelaâs existence. She is not human in form but still sheds tearsâstill feelsâshe is still questioning âwhyâ
Why wouldnât he look at me? Why must I be denied?
Why was I given the mind of a human?
Why did you have to model me after a person with fond memories of you?
Why didnât he ever look at me? He always had his back turned to me.
Why should I bother to look back on the past full of suffering?
Why did I bother entertaining the empty hope that I will reach you one day. What good did I see in you?
Why should I have to be the one that seeks forgiveness?
The final lines before the last are of course the resolution. The knowledge that there are those that would stand by her side in the end.Â
Was there truly no one by my side? Was my struggle meaningless in the endâŠ
I know better now. I know that there are some people who chose to stay until the end.
And it wonât matter if their sentiments towards me were positive or not.
And the gratification of a faint voice heard in the warmth of the light.
The eulogy of praise for one who was denied death and life the same. A lullabye to put to sleep and rest within the light.
â... I'm sorry.
And good jobâ