#kitty rewrites

I drew the bitch ass himself. (but as a child)

oh and I did a little voice for him, I tried to make it sound scratchy

raven and squirrelkit playing <3

Fireheart trotted over to the stream to get a drink of water, exhausted from training Cinderpaw, so much had happened in such little time…. so many things he thought about as he lapped the cold stream water, closing his eyes.

From helping Ravenpaw leave Thunderclan to fighting Brokenstar to training an apprentice of his own was such a big change.

Fireheart reminisced on old times, the times him and Ravenpaw chased each other, the times him and Graystripe caught their first catches, the times when him and his siblings played in Goose’s twoleg’s garden among other things.

Such simpler times… Fireheart thought to himself, he missed Raven very much, he missed spending time with him… now all of it was faded memories.

While Fireheart knew he could visit Raven anytime it just didn’t feel the same with out him, he missed Raven so very dearly, the stench of his fur, the sweet yet anxious expression in his eyes he missed everything 

What is this feeling? Fireheart asked himself finally opening his eyes, only to see his reflection on the stream . 

“I should get going back to camp” Fireheart reminded himself, making his way back to camp.

Fireheart padded into Thunderclan’s camp, little squeals were coming from the nursery, his sister had had her kits.

Fireheart padded inside, Brindleface and the other nursery cats congratulated her on the arrival of her kits 

Fireheart glanced down at his nieces and nephews however he could tell that Cinnamonflower was uneasy with the amount of cats 

Fireheart complimented his sister on her newborn kits, however Mousefur wasn’t impressed at all, The father of Cinnamonflower’s kits was a Kittypet named Oliver. 

Mousefur was trying to say something, something about how Cinnamonflower’s kits didn’t belong in Thunderclan however, something very unexpected happened.

Sandstorm proceeded to leap onto the high rock, she looked like sand being picked up by the wind, “Do yourself a favor and shut up Mousefur!” Sandstorm hissed staring into the Molly’s eyes with fury.

Mousefur fearfully back anyway, “these kits are doing no harm whatsoever, just because Cinnamonflower was in love with a Kittypet and is a former Kittypet herself doesn’t mean we have a right to treat her, her siblings or her kits differently just because we come from different backgrounds” Sandstorm finished.

Cinnamonflower stood in disbelief, she thought that Sandstorm hated her guts, Sandstorm gracefully leaped off the high rock.

Dustpelt stood angrily “you changed your views?!” Dustpelt spat angrily “yeah I no longer believe in that fucking bullshit you shoved down my throat, you’re probably the reason Ravenpaw was so anxious. Good fucking job for being the worst brother in the universe , I hope that you’re proud of yourself” Sandstorm screeched, then slapping Dustpelt with her claws unsheathed.

Drops of blood seeped from Dustpelt’s cheek, he dashed over to the medic’s den quickly Yellowfang turned around “maybe don’t bitch about someone not being clan born, Dustpelt” Yellowfang snarled. 

She was very upset, her mother, Brightflower was bullied like Cloudkit was, she was often called nasty names because of her Kittypet grandfather, Hal.

Yellowfang placed some herbs on Dustpelt’s bleeding cheek, Brightpaw watched from the entrance “you suck, Dustpelt.” she murmured “you mean uncle Dustpelt!” Dustpelt snapped “why should I call you my uncle when you’re going around treating cats like that!” she spat.

I thought I’d showcase Robinwing and Brindleface’s grief in this one. Edit: Ferncloud is no longer the Kit of brindleface. she is now the daughter of Goldenflower and Tigerclaw

Lizardgaze padded into the camp, “im sorry! I got lost!” Lizardgaze meowed apologetically staring at their clan mates .

“Damn it Lizardgaze! don’t do that shit ever again! You had me worried sick!” Robinwing spat “it was an accident!” Lizardgaze insisted.

“Alright now come on” Robinwing mewed leading Lizardgaze to the Weavers Den.

Brindleface had her muzzle buried in her nest, Cherrypool trying her best to comfort her “she’s dead!” Brindleface sobbed mournfully into tulipkit’s cold body “it’s going to be okay, Brindle” Cherrypool vowed, understanding Brindleface’s pain.

Cinnamonflower leaned in and gave Brindleface licks of comfort I wonder how my brother is doing… Brindleface wondered 

Brindleface curled herself around Elderkit and Ashkit I hope I don’t loose you too

-…..

Robinwing was making a pouch out of some thick grass, she had been depressed ever sense her sweet kit had been murdered by a fox .

I miss him so much … Raven, my sweet little kit!  . Robinwing started sobbing from picturing the gruesome scene .

Robinwing began to sob to herself as she weaved.

“Hey mom what’s wrong?” Dustpelt asked “go away” Robinwing hissed still upset at Dustpelt for his treatment of Ravenpaw.

Lizardgaze soon heard the sound of paw steps, “hey Lizardgaze can you make me one of those pouch thing’s please” Fireheart asked 

“Yeah sure! What kind of plants do you want on it? here’s my selection” Lizardgaze murmured dumping out some dried plants. 

“Oh I’ll take the marigold and strawberry leaves” Fireheart stated pawing at each one “alright, good choice! Lizardgaze beamed getting to work, “hey Graystripe! do you want to take our apprentices out to Sunning rocks?” Fireheart yowled “sure” Graystripe shouted  back, Cinderpaw and Brightpaw followed their mentors closely “this is where Redtail died right?” Brightpaw murmured “yes” Graystripe replied “his death had quite an affect on our clan” Graystripe added 

“Hm… I understand” Brightpaw responded, Cinderpaw was playing on the rocks “Cinderpaw be careful! You could get hurt!” Fireheart warned, Cinderpaw hoped down obeying Fireheart’s order “oh that looks fun!” Graystripe mumbled then climbing on the rocks himself “Graystripe stop that! your being a horrible influence!” Fireheart lectured “pssh whatever” Graystripe replied sticking his tongue out at Fireheart however Graystripe lost his grip, he felt his paws slip underneath him he desperately tried to stop however he plunged into the freezing cold water “Graystripe!” Fireheart called out desperately however soon a beautiful tabby appeared from the River Bank.

”not again!” she breathed as she slivered into the water like a serpent, her moth like wings disappeared she now had fins and a instead, her fluffy tail was gone to and she instead had a dark blue fish tail she soon popped out of the water, holding Graystripe by the scruff as she swam to shore Graystripe began hacking up water  he panted with relief staring into the Molly’s beautiful sapphire blue eyes. That’s the most beautiful cat I’ve ever seen Graystripe thought “what’s your name?” Graystripe finally inquired “Silverstream” Silverstream replied “thank you for saving me, Silverstream” Graystripe thanked once again “no problem” Silverstream replied “well I have to get going, maybe we’ll see each other again sometime” Silverstream mumbled as she waved goodbye then disappearing into the water.