#keepers return

Hi guys! Unfortunately I think I’ll be having to take a break from Keepers Return for (hopefully) a short time. I just don’t like how it’s working out and I feel that it is really dragging. I’m already working on chapter nine and there’s just now some action. I really wanted to build up my characters and the story but I did too much building and not enough expanding. Over the next couple weeks or so I’m going to focus on some stuff for MSS- Hallowinx and Sweaterix fics and an original magical girl “miniseries”. I’ll also be trying to figure out Keepers and try to pull it together. I need to get motivated again; I’m having a major lack of confidence in my storytelling and that story itself now. If I can’t figure out what I’m doing, I might have to take a longer pause in that story.

Anila is really bad at sitting normally. She finds it very uncomfortable, and thinks she is most vulnerable since her torso is open. Instead, she often sits with her legs tucked up, partially to the side or straight up against her chest. She’ll also sit on her legs, but only when she knows for sure she’s safe, because its a hard position to jump out of.

Chapter six and seven of Keepers Return is up here!

Hi, how are you? I was wondering if you were still looking for more OCs for your story? If you are, I hope it’s alright to ask some questions, but first I wanted to say that I’ve been reading your story & I really like it, the detail & the characters are really good and the plot has really kept my attention. I can tell that you really put a lot if thought into everything. At first the transitions between characters was confusing, but I’m beginning to get used to it as each chapter goes on. Yay, thanks so much! I love feedback.

Did the information need to be detailed or not? That's up to you! The more detail, the more I know what your character(s) is like and there is less of a chance I do something with your character you don't like.

Also, when it comes to her planet is it fine for it to be made up & I can give you info on it? Sure! Several of the planets I used are made up. (Also: anyone can have characters from the same planets as any of the main ones, just not parts of those families please!)

Would you like her background, and/or likes/dislikes to be included as well? Sure! Whatever information you give me, minus anything I specifically asked for, is up to you. Anything you do supply is a huge help for me and would be great!

Also I noticed that usually every winx story has a girl & a specialist, so I wasn't sure if you wanted me to add one or not. If your fairy has a love interest, go ahead and include them! I'm sure he'll have a place, as my story has Specialists and they need friends too!

Was the final transformation Enchantix or believix? I noticed one of your updates said Enchantix and one said believix, so I wasn't exactly sure. Oh gosh, I'm so sorry for the inconsistency! I changed my mind about Believix after reading some opinions on how it isn't fair that only the Winx Club gets it, and so I decided that I'd open that possibility to those who want it. I'd prefer it be kept to the oldest students though, because it is supposed to be an advanced form.

Sorry for all these questions, I know that if you chose to use my OC, she’d be a secondary/background,etc character, but i tend to be detailed, so I wanted to know. I just wanted to know because I was thinking about sending in my oc, if that’s alright. Go for it, dear! I don't have many submitted right now so I'd love any that people would like to submit!

I’m sorry for sending this through submissions, but since it was this long, I didn't want to flood your inbox with so many asks.

Shining light danced across her chest armor, leaving behind golden etchings of three stars in varying sizes with long beams shooting from each star. The light wrapped up her shoulders, leaving behind identical etchings. 

She pirouettes on her right foot, curling up into a loose ball. A stemmed rose blooms and wraps tightly around her torso, the stem and vines twisting down around her waist and upper legs. It falls away to reveal a sleeveless pale pink bodice with a short, puffy skirt with a mint green ruffle peeking out. She somersaults out of the ball and into an arabesque.

Chapter Five is up and ready to read!

I should stop watching so I can finish typing but ugh, quiet scares me.