#kargo

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The dialogue between Diarko & Kargo here is so stiff. You wouldn't even know that the Chief of the Ulvsbane Tribe is Diarko's father if you don't check the wiki. Why is Kargo's father suddenly being brought up anyway? I mean, I can see the intention. Diarko & Kargo bond through having horrible fathers, but the emotion Kique is aiming to create is lost due to his lack of show and tell. Also, why bring up Ranach in this conversation? And "Bear Cub"? As if bears aren't extinct because of DOGS, much like the Forngrym are implied to have almost been. Anyway. I hope my dialogue edits make more sense.

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Diarko: Hey, Kargo? Can I ask you a question? Kargo: Sure, as long as you don't lose focus.

Diarko: Do you have a father? Was he mean like mine? Kargo: Yes. Diarko: What happened to him?

Diarko: Oh... I don't want to have to kill my father. He is so big... He might- Kargo: Diarko, you should never kill except in self-defense. Take it from an outlaw. If you don't want to face him, don't. Never go looking for trouble. Diarko: I won't, I promise. I've seen so many die already... I just want to protect my family.

Kargo: Then you need to train well and grow strong! Diarko: Stronger than you? Kargo: Watch it.

Diarko: No! You watch it! Kargo: Ah!

Kargo: Nice swing, little warrior.

Kargo: Good! You're finding your balance. Diarko: But I failed to parry. Kargo: Don't beat yourself up, son. You'll learn.