I need to share my thoughts now that everyoneās basically been made aware of
SPOILERS FOR THE āESCAPE THE PIZZAPLEXā BOOK
Ok, now that thatās taken care of. Hereās my thoughts.
Yes I do think that the way this book was handled was.. less than ideal. Cassie does not seem to be very much in character from what we see of her in Ruin. BUT.. as far as Gregās character goes.. I donāt think itās entirely ooc.
Bc while they do not explicitly state it, itās very clear this is GGY weāre dealing with. Not Greg. I dont see any evidence stating otherwise. So the question of why he doesnāt act the way he does in the story GGY?
Guys, Iām telling you. GGY and Vanny are not that far removed from Gregory and Vanessa. They are not the opposite personality, they are the true personalities and traits just AMPLIFIED.
Please thereās SOO much evidence to prove it! Gregory was described as being a prankster and having dark humor. Which is fine. So then once the virus takes over and he becomes GGY, obviously some of those traits will still linger, especially in the beginning, as we saw with Vanessa in the ar emails
Which brings me to my next point. Iāve said since the beginning that I believed this is taking place BEFORE GGY (as in the story) and now, I fully believe it.
I believe Gregory was the one to befriend Cassie, and it was only shortly after that he was targeted to become the next follower (itās possible he was being stalked by Vanny at the time of his and Cassieās meeting, but thatās a heavy speculation) and instead of Cassie being the last supposed victim, she was supposed to be the FIRST. THE TEST.
Bc think about it. Tony and Ellis are not mentioned, bc they havenāt shown up yet. Vanessa is not yet at the pizzaplex as a security guard, sheās still at the Funtime services (we know she transfers AFTER Greg becomes GGY due to the therapy tapes) and it would make sense that early on in the possession, that virus would still be tinkering around with the traits.
So yea, I fully believe that timeline wise, it can work. The idea can work.
The story itself however, is the problem
The way itās executed is in very poor taste of the characters. Cassie is dumbed down tremendously, and the way itās described as how āGregoryā tampered with the programming is very lackluster.
I personally believe this was an attempt to give Cassie a bigger incentive to become the next big antagonist. Bc even if it wasnāt Gregory that was trying to hurt her in the book or who dropped the elevator in ruin, she THINKS it was. Which would allow the virus/mimic/glitchtrap the perfect opportunity to morph and manipulate her into the perfect victim, the one more WILLING to have their mind altered.
However. I think this couldāve easily been done without the need to make Gregoryās character look bad by comparison. It just feels lazy to me if you need to make one character look bad simply to make the other look better. Again, it more than likely is GGY. But bc itās never STATED as such, we donāt have any actual evidence to fall back on.
So yea, could this kind of story theoretically work for the timeline? Yes. But it needed SERIOUS editing and alterations. Cassie simply wouldnāt keep falling for the same stuff multiple times in a row. And there didnāt need to be more incentive for Cassie to become the next big bad. She already has it with ruin.
But yea, thatās my two cents on the whole thing. If I use it for anything, itāll be heavily tweaked. Bc the way the story is now.. itās just.. not great