Sep 24, 2024
Loading...
seen from Canada
seen from China
seen from Türkiye
seen from India
seen from United States
seen from United States
seen from China
seen from Malaysia
seen from Singapore
seen from China
seen from United States
seen from Türkiye
seen from United States
seen from Türkiye
seen from Yemen
seen from Colombia
seen from Russia
seen from Malaysia
seen from China
seen from Türkiye
Anya is live and ready to show you everything. Watch her strip, dance, and perform exclusive shows just for you. Interact in real-time and make your fantasies come true.
Free to watch • No registration required • HD streaming
Anyways, here's the summary I mentioned earlier, and the possible replacement.
Original:
Most of the employees knew the place was a little shady, from the layers of NDAs to the nearly human AI, and not to forget the cutting of corners to cheapen the costs. Regardless, the pay was enough to keep one's mouth shut, and keep them from looking for other work.
Including an animatronic engineer, and one of the very few human janitors. Until one of them found something they shouldn't have.
Stumbling across something made to be forgotten, hidden under layers of garbage, was their first clue that something was much more wrong with this place than questionable management choices. Something thought dead and buried, now awoken by foolish curiosity.
It wasn't until that fateful night, the pair of otherwise unremarkable employees found themselves snagged in a web not meant for them, two new cogs in the machine.
An inconvenience, for sure, but the rabbit wouldn't be so easily phased by the added challenge.
---
Possible rewrite:
Curiosity is a sin in the place where secrets are burned and buried. Bodies meant to rot under piles of garbage, lines of code ever so slightly out of place.
Unfortunately, humans are naturally curious.
All it took was a little unintended overtime, for a pair of unremarkable employees to find themselves snagged in a web not meant for them, two new cogs in the machine.
An inconvience, for sure, but the rabbit wouldn't be so easily phased by the added challenge.
-----
Which is more appealing to you?
Original
Possible Rewrite
Edit: also feel free to give me your thoughts why you like one more than the other or how I might improve either etc. on the post or in my inbox. I'm always trying to improve my writing and that includes writing interesting summaries, and I want feedback.
If I make art for a fic, where should I put it?
Start of the chapter
End of the chapter
Where the scene shown is depicted (middle of fic)
As a link in the notes (image not embedded into the fic)
Clarification: This would be art I made for my own fic, for each chapter.
The Graveyard Shift - Chapter 1
The two employees go about their daily work, but the mundane tasks get disrupted by an unsettling discovery.
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's Rating: General Audiences Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's) & Original Character(s), Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy's) & Original Character(s) Characters: Wesley Stevens (OC), Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's), Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy's) Additional Tags: Touch-Starved, Fluff, Developing Friendships, Short & Sweet Series: Part 2 of Fazbear Entertainment's Nursing Home for Springlock Victims Summary:
Sun has a little theory about their new and friendly janitor, and is determined to test it out, despite Moon's wariness.
---
Finally got around to finishing this silly little thing I started like over half a year ago. You don't need to read the other fic in the series to understand it. Hope u enjoy!
Anya is live and ready to show you everything. Watch her strip, dance, and perform exclusive shows just for you. Interact in real-time and make your fantasies come true.
Free to watch • No registration required • HD streaming
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 1/? Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy’s Rating: Mature Warnings: Graphic Depictions Of Violence Relationships: OC & OC, OC & Daycare Attendant Characters: Wesley Stevens (OC), Heath Patterson (OC), Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Moon (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Sun (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Vanny | Reluctant Follower | Beta-Tester, Gregory (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Glamrock Freddy (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Eve the Crocodile (OC), The Operator (OC), The Glitchtrap virus Additional Tags: Based on RP, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Slow Build, Graphic Descriptions of Injuries, severe injuries, Near Death Experience, destruction of property, (non-permanent) robot death, Drugging, Manipulation, Kidnapping, brief loss of bodily control (coding error), Panic Attacks, Extreme emotional distress, Canon-conpliant robot hacking, Daycare Attendant is ten feet tall just because, takes place before and during Security Breach, accidentally staying overnight, and it’s the worst night of their life Series: Part 1 of Fazbear Entertainment’s Nursing Home for Springlock Victims Summary:
Most of the employees knew the place was a little shady, from the layers of NDAs to the nearly human AI, and not to forget the cutting of corners to cheapen the costs. Regardless, the pay was enough to keep one’s mouth shut, and keep them from looking for other work.
Including an animatronic engineer, and one of the very few human janitors. Until one of them found something they shouldn’t have.
Stumbling across something made to be forgotten, hidden under layers of garbage, was their first clue that something was much more wrong with this place than questionable management choices. Something thought dead and buried, now awoken by foolish curiosity.
It wasn’t until that fateful night, the pair of otherwise unremarkable employees found themselves snagged in a web not meant for them, two new cogs in the machine.
An inconvenience, for sure, but the rabbit wouldn’t be so easily phased by the added challenge.
—–
The first chapter of the big fnaf rp collab fic with @kittykitty707 is finally done!
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 2/? Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy’s Rating: Mature Warnings: Graphic Depictions Of Violence Relationships: OC & OC, Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy’s) & Original Character(s) Characters: Wesley Stevens (OC), Heath Patterson (OC), Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Moon (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Sun (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Vanny | Reluctant Follower | Beta-Tester, Gregory (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Glamrock Freddy (Five Nights at Freddy’s), Eve the Crocodile (OC), The Operator (OC), The Glitchtrap virus Additional Tags: Based on RP, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Slow Build, Graphic Descriptions of Injuries, severe injuries, Near Death Experience, destruction of property, (non-permanent) robot death, Drugging, Manipulation, Kidnapping, brief loss of bodily control (coding error), Panic Attacks, Extreme emotional distress, Canon-conpliant robot hacking, Daycare Attendant is ten feet tall just because, takes place before and during Security Breach, accidentally staying overnight, and it’s the worst night of their life, Most warning tags don’t apply until later chapters, Content warnings for each chapter in author’s notes Series: Part 1 of Fazbear Entertainment’s Nursing Home for Springlock Victims Summary:
Most of the employees knew the place was a little shady, from the layers of NDAs to the nearly human AI, and not to forget the cutting of corners to cheapen the costs. Regardless, the pay was enough to keep one’s mouth shut, and keep them from looking for other work.
Including an animatronic engineer, and one of the very few human janitors. Until one of them found something they shouldn’t have.
Stumbling across something made to be forgotten, hidden under layers of garbage, was their first clue that something was much more wrong with this place than questionable management choices. Something thought dead and buried, now awoken by foolish curiosity.
It wasn’t until that fateful night, the pair of otherwise unremarkable employees found themselves snagged in a web not meant for them, two new cogs in the machine.
An inconvenience, for sure, but the rabbit wouldn’t be so easily phased by the added challenge.
Chapter 2: Operating Protocols
A couple of simple sketches of the main protagonists of The Graveyard Shift, Wesley Stevens (left) and Heath Patterson (right).