You’re Gonna Die.
● Greetings, it tis I, Admin NightmareSpinner. Our lovely QueenCappy is in another dimension (jk she’s just in another state right now) ;-; and I am left here to review and all that good stuff. Now, at the moment I don’t want to review without the “okay” from QueenCappy so I will just “point out” some things.
   It has come to my attention that a lot of mary sue’s oc’s play the forbidden love card, and of course since people do no research or gave zero fucks when taught about story tropes completely mess this up. I have nothing against forbidden love but, if there is a character who is hell bent on killing a group of people/clan/organization  they are not just gonna magically fall for your character of said group, chances are they would kill your oc too. Okay, that’s all for now.
Pleasant dreams!~
-NightmareSpinner













