How to write better descriptions
One thing that’s really transformed my writing for the better is to make the descriptions MATTER to the characters.
Don’t describe what something looks like, describe how it makes them feel or what associations the character has to that thing.
Example: Old wedding Ring
Don’t describe the color and texture of the ring; describe the way its worn, the way the character assumes it’s not been well-kept. Perhaps make them a bit sad that it’s been lost or not cared for properly. Or perhaps happy that it’s often worn. See there already - you add CHARACTER VALUES to the description already. Much more interesting than focusing on what the ring actually looks like.
We don’t care what a ladder looks like, until the character is scared that it may break if they climb on it
no one cares about the shade of someone’s eyes, but they can care about the impression/feel of their eyes (cold or warm, approachable or not, distant or not) because it AFFECTS HOW OUR CHARACTER ACTS AROUND THAT CHARACTER.
No one cares about what a chair looks like until that particular chair matters to one of our characters (dad’s chair that no one sits in since he died, a throne, a kids chair that makes the character’s lanky legs sprawl awkwardly on the floor)
No one cares about a piece of history until the character is personally effected by, or emotionally invested in, that particular part of history. SAME THING WITH ASPECTS OF WORLDBUILDING. Stop infodumping and keep the suspense, please
Because readers can fill the gaps themselves with their imagination.
If the description does not directly give us EMOTION or SIGNIFICANCE to the CHARACTER - REWRITE.
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