#commander cosmo

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This fic sort of just happened as I got sick of my more actively ongoing WIP. I might write something more about GG next while I slowly work on the fic where five comes to walter manor and conceptualize more about what a 1950 fic would be like. Getting into guy hottie pov is proving difficult. 

But regardless!!! here’s another very experimental style fic!! its been a while since i really threw myself at something as wild as this. its not the same writing style as auspicious, really, its...significantly looser, and intentionally more frantic and falling apart. 

I read a really good book recently. Angel Down - Daniel Kraus, its not in any way a similar style to this, but it is very expierimental and i had a great time chewing on it. It was also deeply startling to read because its like something I would write! in that its experimental grammar bullshit. Its making me wonder if I ever could actually get published writing my weird stories that are sideways and fascinating text art.

but regardless - i had a lot of fun writing this, and i might make a podfic for it with, woah, get this, me talking! anyway, uh, please mind the tags, this is kinda dark, but wellllllllll, i had a whimsical and wonderific time writing this POV this frantic. was a lot of fun. I think i need to take a break from more structured writing and do wierd sensory exploratory bullshit like this and maybe it’ll help. 

have a lovely day!