Commentary on Chapter 29 of The Blue Castle
âBefore them lay Mistawis, like a scene out of some fairy tale of old time.â
Valancy was forbidden to read novels, but evidently she was not forbidden to read fairy tales or Shakespeare. Which might have been a weird sort of blessing in disguise - her imagination did not get prosaic as she aged.
âSupper was the meal Valancy liked best. The faint laughter of winds was always about them and the colours of Mistawis, imperial and spiritual, under the changing clouds were something that cannot be expressed in mere words. Shadows, too. Clustering in the pines until a wind shook them out and pursued them over Mistawis. They lay all day along the shores, threaded by ferns and wild blossoms. They stole around the headlands in the glow of the sunset, until twilight wove them all into one great web of dusk.â
I like this summer holiday vibe.
âHow sweet it was to sit there and do nothing in the beautiful silence, with Barney at the other side of the table, smoking!â
This book almost makes you want to be in a romantic relationship with a man!!
âMusic would drift to them alluringly from boats here and there, or from the verandahs on the big house of the millionaire on the biggest island.
âWould you like a house like that, Moonlight?â Barney asked once, waving his hand at it.â
Montgomery is finally starting to lay down some clues about Barneyâs second secret identity.
âHe had taken to calling her Moonlight, and Valancy loved it.â
This Moonlight nickname thing was also sneered at by the literary critics for being too cheesy and sentimental. I mean, it is cheesy I guess, but I donât find it particularly unrealistic. People get goofy when they are in love, especially in the first months of a relationship. And I like it, I donât care.
âAway down at the far end of the lake they got every night a glimpse of a big, continental train rushing through a clearing.â
The pieces are being laid for the climax of the novelâŚ
Also this will be the railway Valancyâs father worked on in his youth in my fanfic Wuâs.
âSo many hours a day Barney shut himself up in Bluebeardâs Chamber. Valancy never saw the inside of it. From the smells that filtered through at times she concluded he must be conducting chemical experimentsâor counterfeiting money.â
What are those smells though? Ink?
âThere is no such thing as freedom on earth,â he said. âOnly different kinds of bondages. And comparative bondages. You think you are free now because youâve escaped from a peculiarly unbearable kind of bondage. But are you? You love meâthatâs a bondage.â
I also must say that I observed a tendency in everyone to view Barney simply as a Prince Charming/Giant Teddy Bear/Reward For Valancy. He indeed is quite a decent guy, but I think he is more cynical and âconvincing as a manâ than we sometimes give him credit for.
âWho said or wrote that âthe prison unto which we doom ourselves no prison isâ?â asked Valancy dreamily, clinging to his arm as they climbed up the rock steps.â
It is apparently from a poem of Wordsworth.
âAh, now you have it,â said Barney. âThatâs all the freedom we can hope forâthe freedom to choose our prison.â
The central thesis of all romance novels voiced out. And I love it. This book is intelligent.
âBut, Moonlight,ââhe stopped at the door of the Blue Castle and looked about himâat the glorious lake, the great, shadowy woods, the bonfires, the twinkling lightsââMoonlight, Iâm glad to be home again. When I came down through the woods and saw my home lightsâmineâgleaming out under the old pinesâsomething Iâd never seen beforeâoh, girl, I was gladâglad!â
I think Montgomery did a good enough job with Barneyâs speech. The emphasis on his home being âhisâ, him calling Valancy simply âgirlâ - he talks in a masculine manner while still sounding romantic and being dreamy. Thatâs not always easy to pull off.