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so this is my newest group; Cloud Precure~ o 7 o (left to right; Cure Zephyr, Cure Breeze, Cure Storm)

What do you think of their designs? And could you perhaps suggest something for the story? I really don't know aha.. QuQ;; Thank you in advance <3

Well, I've commented on these before, but this time I'll be more detailed ^^~ I really like their designs, they're really detailed and ruffly! As far as I can tell Cure Zephyr seems like the kind elegant type, Cure Breeze the usual main character happy type and Cure Storm a bit of a tomboy type. Like I've mentioned before, you can see some details that remind me a lot of Smile Precure and Suite Precure, but this isn't necessarily a bad thing! 

A small detail for the names, a name like Zephyr seems a bit out of place next to more simple names like Breeze and Storm. Maybe a more simple name will fit more?

As for the story... With Cloud Precure I immediatly think of the weather, I can already imagine bad guys coming with monsters that make it rain very hard, or make the sun shine to bright, causing climate problems? Maybe the mascot came from another world where they already sort of "destroyed" the climate there, and wants help of the Precure to restore it back to normal? These are just some ideas xD

Cure Ice, one of my first Precure OCs~ She's a Heartcatch OC whom I drew a lot two years ago(she's one of the few who has a backstory ahahah) Please tell me what you think ^^

Ah she's such a cute OC Cure! While Ice has been used alot in the theme of Precure OCs, she still stands out quite well! The uses of blue is very nicely layed out in different shades so she doesnt look like like one bland block of colour~ Also the snowflake tie in her hair is a nice touch!

Cure Emeralddd by *ChanceToDraw

Of course I'm submitting my Cure Emerald o v o

I've been thinking about changing her design a bit (adding a few details) since it's pretty plain . A . Any ideas? Thank you~

Oh and I've been wanting to get some help to improve the story ; u ; Since it's pretty much a mix of Heartcatch and Yes! 5. So uhm yish let's explain~ The enemy (who's a former precure) once lost the hope to achieve her dreams, which made her unable to transform into a precure and so she feels no one has the right to become happy and live their dreams. Each person's soul has a gemstone to reflect it (think something like Heartcatch) and it starts to crack when someone starts to give up on chasing their dreams. The enemy uses this chance to make a monster out of it. The Precure needs to purify the monster to defeat it and stuff. That way the people will gain hope and dreams again.

I guess something like this .// A //. it's kinda embarrassing to write this stuff ahaha =// u //=;; please help me with the story o A o

Hooray! I'm a big fan of this design personally, the jewels are added well and its simpleness works very well! Plain sometimes is good~ I think though if you REALLY want to add some more detail, maybe add some more of the ruffles on her sleeves and boots , maybe a bow on the back of her hair~