Oh my goodness they are so cute and dumb and silly and stupid oh my daysss AAAAAAAAA I am holding this chapter so close to my heart they are so screwed💔💔💔
Lloyd giving Harumi that crystal… surely he wont end up regretting it, right? RIGHT?
I adore this Kai-Antonia-Jesse trio, they are so fun, AND I LOVE SUNNI SO MUCH I can’t wait to see more of her!!
But can you imagine being in a yearning competition and you got Lloyd, Kai and Jesse (emphasis on Jesse)as your opponents? I would immediately pack my things and skedaddle out of there
And ooooo Dareth chasing Cole and Zane with the ruler, but not interrupting aftershock? Oooooo favoritism (ain’t complaining tho I am going to reread their dance until I get sick of it I WILL NEVER GET SICK OF IT)
However, I do have a tiny question: will these flowers that Jesse keeps throwing up impact in someway his health? Like, there is no way he will be completely fine after going through that almost everyday.. Idk, I really enjoy your take on hanahaki disease. Your descriptions of it are so well made sometimes I get slightly nauseous too while reading them (I mean this in a good way)
Anyways, I KNOW Nya and Olivia’s dance is going to be so cinematic I’m so thrilled omg!!!
They’re all as carefree as they can be……..surely nothing devastating will change that soon………
‘He won’t end up regretting it RIGHT?’ <- he does and he doesn’t in equal measure believe it or not…
Kai+Jesse+ Someone Sassy is always a good trio combination lmao
YAY SUNNI LOVE, i HAD to give her some justice here because i kept pushing it offfffffff (but she’ll be much more prominent next book, if the obvious foreshadowing wasn’t obvious)
Dareth, walking past Jesse and Cole: I pretend I do not see it
And I mean, it’s definitely affecting Jesse’s mental health, but physically it’s not actually at risk of harming/killing him; it just feels like it is in the moment (he’s very dramatic that way). That said, it is an exhausting thing to go through and Jesse ideally should rest after each time it happens which he will not be doing
(Also, that was our last ~flower scene~ for this fic, about TIME, so we don’t have to worry about him anymore! Except we do ) (but oof it is a very difficult thing to write differently each time let me tell you. Need to get some tips from Harumi about how to change it up….)
Ayo Nya and Olivia’s dance is currently my favorite one, I’m very excited to show it off! hopefully not months and months from now 🙌)
Thank you so much for the kind words!!!
