I hope you donβt think Iβm too cruel, but I feel like you write the Reader with too much of an image in your head to not allow us to give into our own imaginations. Like you say the Reader always smells like Vanilla or give them pink panties and etc.,
Nonnie, you make an excellent point !
I think my problem is that I get way too into the vision in my own head (and I don't proofread NEARLY enough) and I rely too much on the usual descriptors for immersion if that makes sense ?? so the vision ends up a little too rigid, which is definitely not what I want.
I've also never really written anything like this before, and I've definitely never posted, so it's definitely still a learning curve for me! I want you guys to be able to fully enjoy the work that I put out and be able to see yourselves in it, though, so I really appreciate getting these little pieces of constructive criticism! I will definitely be keeping this in mind with the next few fics I'm writing!
And you weren't cruel at all, dear. Very helpful and kind! I appreciate you!
Don't be afraid to speak your mind here, I promise I don't bite! We're all adults at the end of the day and as long as everyone is kind and understanding and we treat each other with respect, I am more than happy to hear what you have to say whether that's praise or helpful critique!π«Άπ»
