🫂How would the story have changed if you wrote it for [Mon x Krennic] instead? - for Better Half
Quite a lot would've changed if it was Mon x Krennic. Now, fun fact: my first idea was for a Monnic fanfic. A darksoulmate with these two does sound appealing. However, it didn't fit several conditions for the darksoulmate I wanted to write.
For starters, Krennic would have been onto Mon way quicker than he is onto Kleya. Mon is an accomplished Senator. They've faced each other at the Witness Stand several times according to 2x06. The buildup would've been totally different.
With Kleya it's different because he doesn't know her. She's just a plain gallery assistant.
Orson's hubris doesn't let him look at Kleya and see her as a threat. He underestimates her every step of the way. And Kleya... Kleya revels in it. Her whole persona is built on looking harmless and approachable. She smiles prettily at everyone, she is the thoughtful attendant who is there to please the clientele.
She weaponizes her gallery attendant persona against Orson whenever she's a chance and when she's confronted about it, she pretends she doesn't know what's being talking about.
Of course Krennic isn't that stupid. He notices some patterns and Kleya is a creature of habit after all. But his arrogance is also another one of his defining qualities. And to see that Kleya doesn't behave as her real self with him is one thing (she doesn't want the bond, neither does he, etc etc), but to see her as a Rebel is another thing altogether. It'd mean he'd need to recognize her as his equal. Which he doesn't.
It's not to say he thinks Mon is his equal. He doesn't think it either. But Mon has accomplishments under her belt that he knows of. Kleya doesn't. She's also way younger than Mon, so easier to manipulate, or so he thinks.
The power imbalance and how Kleya plays with it to her gain is one of the core themes of Better Half that wouldn't be possible if I wrote it with Mon.
So yeah... it'd be VERY different if the story was Mon x Krennic to the point it wouldn't be recognizable. It's not change the characters and you still have the same story. To change the characters means to change the heart of the story.
Could I have made it work? Probably. Would I like it as much? I'm not so sure. The core themes would've to be way different and those core themes do show up in other Monnic stories that other talented writers have already discussed at length.
If your question is along the lines "Do you like the idea of Mon and Krennic together?", then the answer is Yes.
If your question is "Did you actually ship Krennic x Kleya because of their little interaction?" My answer is no and will always remain no. The appeal of Krennic x Kleya is NOT what's in the canon but what IT COULD BE.
Sorry it became an essay and thanks for coming to my TED Talk. Thanks for the ask and for giving me reasons to talk about Better Half at length here hehe
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