The Rookie: Echoes of the Past - Chapter Nine Previous Chapters: One / Two / Three / Four / Five / Six / Seven / Eight Spotify Playlist for The Rookie: Echoes of the Past - HERE TW: None
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I won't give no fucks
I won't take no shit
Try to burn me down
Get this whole place lit
I won't give no fucks
I won't take no shit
They said they want war; this is it
Let the body drop
Then let the body drop
Then let the body drop
Then let the body drop
The heavy iron smell of rust and sweat hung thick in the air of the precinctβs basement gym. It was barely 0500, an hour before her shift would officially start, and the room was completely empty.
Ellie drove a wrapped left hook directly into the center of the heavy punching bag. She didn't pause. She threw a right cross, followed by a swift combination, her breathing ragged and heavy. Every impact sent a sharp, dull ache radiating straight across her ribs where the purple bruise from the vest sat, but she welcomed the pain. It was a physical distraction from the chaotic noise inside her head.
She caught the bag with both hands, pressing her forehead against the cool, rough canvas as her chest heaved. Her auburn hair was soaked, sticking to the nape of her neck, and her blue eyes were fixed blindly on the concrete floor.
The glowing screen of the terminal from last night was burned into her retinas. Victor was here for her.
Do I tell the team?
If she went to Sergeant Grey, if she showed Nolan the files and confessed exactly who Victor Martin was to her family, the response would be immediate. They would wrap her in a bubble. Nolan would look at her with that suffocating, paternal worry, and Grey would pull her off the streets instantly. In the LAPD, when a cop becomes a personal target, they get sidelined for their own safety. She would be stuck behind a desk in the records room, completely blind and entirely vulnerable while her friends risked their lives hunting down a monster that wanted her. She couldn't let Nolan or Angela take a bullet meant for her.
Or do I handle it myself?
The thought was dangerous, reckless, and completely went against everything she had learned at the academy. But it was tempting. She could hunt him in the shadows of L.A. without a badge tying her hands or endangering the people she cared about. She could finally finish the fight Victor started years ago when he ruined her brother's life.
She caught her reflection in the wall mirror. She was wearing the LAPD physical training shirt. She had fought through a broken home, a traumatic past, chronic illness, and a grueling academy to wear that emblem. If she ran off on a rogue vendetta, she was no better than the criminals she locked up. But if she stayed silent, she was putting a target on the back of every officer in Mid-Wilshire.
The gym door clicked open, and the heavy footsteps of the morning shift began to echo down the hallway. Time was up. She had less than thirty minutes to get into uniform and make a choice.
The fluorescent lights of the roll-call room felt exceptionally harsh after the dark, solitary intensity of the basement gym. Ellie walked in just as the clock ticked toward 0555. The room was already buzzing with the familiar morning energyβthe scrape of chairs, the rustle of paper, and the low murmur of cops nursing their first cups of coffee.
She took her usual seat next to Nolan, consciously forcing her shoulders to drop and her posture to look relaxed.
Nolan was already at the table, a clipboard in front of him. The moment she sat down, his T.O. radar went off. He turned his head, his brow furrowing as his eyes scanned her face.
"You look tired," Nolan murmured, his voice low enough to stay between the two of them. "Did you actually go home and sleep like Grey told us to? Because you have that look you get when you've been overthinking."
Ellie offered a quick, practiced smile, adjusting her duty belt to hide the slight tremor in her fingers. "I slept fine, John. Just a little stiff. Nothing a little caffeine won't fix."
Nolan didn't look entirely convinced, but before he could press further, the door at the front of the room swung open. Sergeant Grey walked in, his presence instantly silencing the room. The shift commander didn't look like he had slept at all; his face was a tight mask of serious concentration as he rested his hands on the podium.
"Listen up," Grey began, his deep voice commanding the room. "We are on high alert today. Following the chaos at the Vanguard Vault last night, intelligence indicates the SureΓ±os may be mobilizing. Marcos Calderon is deep in hiding, but some of his people may be looking for payback. They want Victor Martinβs head on a spike, and they don't care if the we get caught in the crossfire."
Grey clicked a remote, flashing Victor Martinβs grainy security camera image onto the large projector screen.
Ellie's chest tightened. Staring at Victorβs silhouette on the wall, the weight of the secret she was keeping felt physically crushing. She knew his name. She knew his history. She knew exactly why he was executing these gang members. And she knew she was the final name on his list.
"Every patrol unit is to operate in pairsβno solo responses to any calls in our district" Grey continued, his eyes sweeping across the room and lingering briefly on Ellie and Nolan. "Forensics is still trying to pull something from that four-second encrypted phone call I received last night. Until we know who that computerized voice belongs to, we treat every anomaly as a potential ambush. Stay sharp, watch your six, and bring each other home."
Grey slammed his clipboard down. "Nolan, Moore, you're on case detail, but you stay attached to Detectives Lopez and Harper. Clear out."
The room erupted into the sudden noise of chairs scraping back. Ellie stood up, her mind spinning. The trap was setting itself around her. If she spoke up right now, she could give Grey the missing puzzle piece. If she stayed silent, she was letting Nolan walk blindly into a war meant entirely for her.
Nolan grabbed his duty bag, looking over at her with a sharp, determined nod. "Alright, partner. Let's go find Lopez and see if SID found anything else on those Polaroids."
Ellie swallowed the lump in her throat, her decision hanging by a thread. "Lead the way," she said quietly.
The bullpen was a hive of activity as officers scrambled to their shops, others to their desks, but Angela Lopez wasn't moving. She stood by the coffee machine; her eyes locked onto Ellie from the moment the rookie walked out of the roll-call room. Angela had been a detective long enough to read body language like an open book, and Ellie was practically vibrating with tense, suppressed energy.
As Nolan walked ahead toward the equipment desk to grab their war bags, Angela stepped directly into Ellieβs path, cutting her off from the exit.
"Moore. With me," Angela said. It wasnβt an invitation.
Angela grabbed Ellie by the armβcareful to avoid her bruised ribsβand pulled her into a vacant interrogation room, letting the heavy door click shut behind them. The room was sterile and quiet, completely cutting off the noise of the precinct.
Angela leaned back against the metal table, crossing her arms. Her expression was completely stripped of its usual warmth, replaced by the sharp, intimidating focus of a seasoned interrogator.
"Start talking," Angela commanded quietly.
Ellie tried to look confused, her blue eyes widening. "Excuse me? Ang, we need to get out to the shop. Nolan is waitingβ"
"Nolan is blinded by his dad instincts, but Iβm not," Angela interrupted, her voice cutting like glass. "I watched you in roll call, Ellie. When Grey put Victor Martinβs picture on the screen, you didn't look alert. You looked terrified. And not 'I almost got shot last night' terrified. It was personal."
Ellie swallowed hard, her heart was hammering so hard she was certain Angela could hear it. "Iβm just stressed about the case, Angela."
"Don't lie to me," Angela said, stepping closer, her gaze drilling into Ellie. "I called the records clerk this morning to pull some cross-references on the SureΓ±os. Know what he told me? He said someone used a secure terminal in the basement records room at two o'clock this the morning. A terminal logged under your ID."
Ellie froze. Shit. She hadnβt thought about the files being restricted or tracked.
"You didn't go home last night, Ellie. You stayed here, bruised and exhausted, digging through restricted databases," Angela said, her tone shifting from accusatory to fiercely protective. "And then I see you marching into roll call looking like youβve got some big secret. If you are compromised, or if you know something about Victor Martin that wasnβt in that briefing, you need to tell me right now. Because if you keep a secret like that on the streets today, you are going to get yourself, or Nolan, killed."
The heavy silence stretched between them. Ellie looked at Angelaβs hard, determined face, realizing her wall of isolation had just been completely dismantled. She was faced with a choice: trust one of her closest friends on the force or continue down a dark path entirely alone.
Before Ellie could form a response, the heavy metal door handle rattled, and the door swung open. Nolan stood in the threshold, holding two tactical war bags over his shoulders and a clipboard under his arm.
"Hey, there you two are," Nolan said, his brow furrowing as he took in the thick, suffocating tension in the small room. He looked between Angelaβs rigid stance and Ellieβs pale face. "Am I interrupting something? We need to get down to the motor pool. Nyla just called from the field; she wants us to meet her down near the industrial district."
Angela didn't break eye contact with Ellie for a long, agonizing second. The silent threat in the detective's eyes was perfectly clear:
This isn't over.
Slowly, Angela turned her head toward Nolan, her sharp interrogator persona melting back into her usual confident demeanor. "No interruption, Nolan. Just giving your rookie, a piece of advice."
Nolan nodded, a soft aloof smile, "let's go see what Harperβs found.β
"Go ahead, Nolan. I'll catch up with Nyla in a minute," Angela said, her voice dropping to a low, serious register. She kept her back to Nolan as he walked away, ensuring only Ellie could hear her next words. "We are going to finish this conversation, boot. Today. Either you tell Nolan what you're hiding, or I will."
Ellie gave a tight, barely visible nod. She gripped the strap of her duty belt, turned on her heel, and followed Nolan down the bustling hallway toward the garage. The clock was ticking louder than ever, and she knew she was running out of time before her secrets blew up in her face.
The morning sun was just starting to bake the concrete of the industrial district as Nolan and Ellie pulled up to the curb. The neighborhood was a bleak stretch of faded brick warehouses, rusted chain-link fences, and overgrown weeds pushing through the cracked asphalt. Nylaβs unmarked black SUV was already parked near the entrance of a seemingly abandoned textile mill.
Nolan cut the engine, and he and Ellie stepped out into the dry heat. Angelaβs vehicle pulled in right behind them, the detective slamming her door with a little more force than necessaryβa silent, lingering reminder to Ellie that their interrupted conversation was still hanging over her head.
Nyla met them near the rusted gate, holding a digital tablet. "SID finished a deep-dive enhancement on the Polaroids we pulled from the silver sedan's glovebox," she explained without preamble, gesturing for the group to gather around. "They mapped the background details of the photos. The bricks, the specific pattern of the corrugated steel roofing, and the vintage loading dock doorsβthey all match this exact facility."
Ellie forced herself to focus, her blue eyes narrowing as she looked past Nyla toward the massive, silent building. "So, this isn't just where Victor ditched the getaway vehicle. This facility is likely his hidden planning area, before he started executing the SureΓ±os."
"Exactly," Angela said, her voice sharp as she kept her gaze fixed squarely on Ellie. "Which means whatever clues he left behind in those photos are somewhere inside these walls. We proceed with extreme caution. Weapons down but ready."
The four officers moved toward the side entrance of the warehouse in a tight, synchronized tactical stack. Nolan took the point, his larger frame providing a shield as he slowly pushed open a heavy, unbolted metal door. It let out a long, agonizing screech that echoed into the cavernous interior.
"LAPD,β Nolan called out into the dark space. Only silence answered. The air inside was thick with the smell of old engine oil, stagnant dust, and rotting timber. Shafts of morning light pierced through cracked, grime-covered windows high above, illuminating millions of dust motes dancing in the air.
They moved deeper into the warehouse, clearing the old assembly lines and rusted machinery step by step. There was no sign of Victor Martinβno fresh footprints in the thick dust, no humming generators. The warehouse was entirely empty, a hollow monument to L.A.'s industrial past.
"Over here," Nyla called out from the back corner of the main floor, near an old supervisor's office that had been walled off with plywood.
Ellie and Nolan hurried over, keeping their eyes on the dark corners. Inside the small office, a metal folding table sat under a single dangling lightbulb. Scattered across the surface were a few empty water bottles, a discarded box of ammunition casings, and a map of Los Angeles pinned to the wall with a heavy hunting knife. It was exactly the setup from the background of the first Polaroid.
"This is it," Nolan said quietly, shining his tactical light across the table. "Heβs been here. He planned the Ruiz hit right out of this room."
Ellie stepped closer to the table, her heart rate ticking upward as she stared at the map. Victor had been sitting right where she was standing, plotting his executions. They were standing in the heart of the killer's lair, surrounded by the remnants of his planning, and she knew the next clue to his ultimate endgame was hiding somewhere in this very room.
Angela stepped around the metal folding table, her tactical flashlight slicing through the shadows of the cramped office. While Nyla focused on the map pinned to the wall, she kept her eyes low, scanning the floorboards and the trash left behind. Her light caught on something wedged between the back of the metal desk and the rotting baseboard.
"Hold on," Angela said, crouching down. Using a gloved hand, she pulled out a crumpled, stained manila folder. It had been intentionally hidden, tucked away from plain sight. Angela brought it up to the light of the dangling bulb, smoothing out the wrinkled paper.
Nolan and Nyla crowded around her, but Angelaβs eyes instantly shot to Ellie.
"What is it, Lopez?" Nolan asked, leaning in.
Angela didn't answer him. Instead, she flipped the folder open. Inside was a comprehensive dossier detailing a familiar name and historyβone that the team had already discovered earlier in Ellie's journey. It was a complete profile on Riley Ryan; the identity Ellie had left behind before changing her name. But it wasn't just old public records. The folder contained surveillance photos of Ellie taken over the last few weeks in Los Angeles. There were images of her leaving her apartment, walking into the Mid-Wilshire station, and sitting in the shop with Nolan. Stapled to the very last page was a printed prison roster from the London Correctional Facility in Ohio, with her brother's name heavily circled in black ink, and also a photo of a much younger Ellie. Next to it, Victor had scrawled a single, bone-chilling sentence:
You can't hide behind a new name.
The room went dead silent. The low hum of the distant L.A. traffic outside seemed to fade entirely, leaving only the sound of Ellieβs ragged breathing. Nolan looked from the dossier to Ellie, his face washing over with immediate, protective dread. "Ellie... he knows. We knew about your past as Riley, but Victor has been tracking you ever since he got to L.A. He has photos of your routines."
Nyla stepped back toward the door, her expression hardening as she connected the dots. "This wasn't a standard gang vendetta. The SureΓ±os were just a distraction to clear the board. He's hunting you down for what happened with your brother back in Ohio. For when you put them away.β
Angela closed the folder with a sharp snap, her eyes drilling into Ellie with an intense mix of urgency and frustration. "I knew you were hiding something in roll call. Victor isn't just a threat to the city anymore, Moore. You need to tell us everything about his patterns right now, because your number just got called."
Ellie stood frozen beneath the single lightbulb, her blue eyes wide as the true scope of Victor's trap was laid bare. He had known who she was the entire time. She looked at Nolan, seeing the fierce, paternal terror in his eyes, and realized she could no longer hold anything back.
The weight of the surveillance photos, the circled prison roster, and the realization that Victor had been watching her every move became entirely too much in that moment. The cramped plywood office felt like it was physically shrinking, suffocating her.
Without a word, Ellie turned on her heel and walked out.
"Ellie, wait!" Nolan called out, moving to follow her.
Angela caught Nolan by the arm, her grip tight and unyielding. "Let her go for a second, Nolan. You need to hear this first."
Nolan pulled against her grip; his brow furrowed with confusion and protective instinct.
"Lopez, sheβs falling apart. I need to get out there."
"She lied to you, John," Angela said, her voice dropping to a harsh, serious register. "She didn't go home last night after the precinct phone call. I checked the logs this morning. She stayed in the basement records room until two in the morning, pulling restricted files on her brother and Victor Martin. She knew exactly how dangerous this was, she knew he was targeting her, and she marched into roll call this morning and let you ride in a shop with her anyway."
Nolan went completely rigid, the words hitting him like a physical blow. The paternal warmth in his expression vanished, replaced by a sudden, sharp wave of hurt and anger. He pulled his arm free from Angela's grip and marched out of the warehouse. Outside, the mid-morning heat was brutal, radiating off the cracked asphalt.
Ellie was standing by the passenger side door of the shop, her hands gripped tightly onto the roof frame, her head hung low as she tried to force her breathing to level out. Her ribs ached, her head pounded, and she could feel resolve starting to waver under the intense stress.
"Why didn't you tell me?" Nolan's voice boomed across the empty industrial lot, completely stripped of his usual gentle demeanor.
Ellie flinched but didn't turn around. "John, please. Not right now."
"No, right now!" Nolan yelled, stepping into her space and forcing her to look at him. His face was flushed, his eyes flashing with a mix of fury and genuine terror. "Angela just told me you were here until two o'clock in the morning digging through files. You found out Victor was tracking you; you found out you were his ultimate target, and you hid it from me. We sat in that car for hours today, Ellie! We walked into this building together!"
Ellie finally snapped, turning on him with tears of anger and frustration bright in her blue eyes. "I did it to protect you!"
"Protect me?" Nolan countered, throwing his hands up. "By letting me walk blindly into what couldβve been an ambush? By keeping a target on your back while I'm supposed to be your Training Officer? That is not how this works!"
"If I told you, Sergeant Grey would have yanked my badge and put me in a safe house!" Ellie screamed back, her voice cracking as years of isolation and fear came pouring out. "I would be sitting in a dark room, completely blind, waiting for a monster from my past to hunt me down! And youβyou would have been out on the streets trying to play the hero! Victor ruined my brother's life. He destroyed my family. I refuse to let him destroy yours too!"
Nolan stopped, the sheer desperation in her voice cutting through his anger. He stared at his rookie, seeing past the uniform to the terrified, defensive twenty-nine-year-old who had spent her entire life learning that she could only rely on herself. The heavy silence stretched between them in the heat of the parking lot, both breathing heavily, the rift between T.O. and rookie wider than it had ever been.
Authors Note: Okay, so this chapter is now the longest. I dunno, I just keep having more and more to write, and I never want to stop.
Please let me know if the length is becoming too much and you need me to scale back.

















